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Drop the bag, oh weary hermit Mangled fear and desire God awaits you at the summit Love your soul does aspire Recognise earth life role Entwine mind-body-soul That here now you feel whole Hoist the flag Drop the bag 05-May-2022 Quietus

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Date: 5/5/2022 3:00:00 PM
'Hoist the flag' 'Drop the bag.' Getting to the top means giving up our comfort blankets, I guess...
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Date: 5/5/2022 6:44:00 PM
The mind … drop thought. Without thoughts ego recedes, fears and desires vanish, we then are, unleashed awareness, poised in no-thingness