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Drizzle Mizzle

Grey hovers in jagged knots over the blue expanse on high, Sure sign of coming rain, Thunder faraway, the clouds sigh! Soft tears unleashed, valley washed, Feel the drizzle on your skin, Clouds cry, leaving you cold, Lightning flash nearby, misty grin! A bow curves delightfully embellishing the vast sky in brilliant hues, Dark clouds pass, sprinkles cease, Smiles brighten as rainbow inspires muse. 07.29.2021 For Joseph May's "Alpha Lines" contest

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/16/2021 9:40:00 AM

You have uplifted a rain cloud in this one.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/11/2021 10:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write and rain picture. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Joseph May

Date: 8/9/2021 7:03:00 PM

Wonderful write Jo, Congrats on your win

Eve Roper

Date: 8/8/2021 3:08:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/8/2021 3:40:00 AM

Hi Jo, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/31/2021 4:11:00 AM

Muses have a natural element that draws sun and people alike, you have a great must there Jo, enjoy its fruits. xo

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/30/2021 7:57:00 PM

The whole poem sure does inspire the muse, Jo, with wonderful woven words. I'll see the rain so different now.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/29/2021 5:29:00 PM

Alpha lines -- as good as gold, Jo. Very lovely penned. ~ Awash in rain and rainbows. :) gw

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 7/29/2021 11:20:00 AM

Great flow of words Jo just like raindrops!

Marilene Evans

Date: 7/29/2021 10:09:00 AM

Exquisite write. Vivid imagery.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/29/2021 9:47:00 AM

WoW! Jo, You did an outstanding job! Everything flow just right. Good descriptions of rain ending with a lovely bow. Well done. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 7/29/2021 9:14:00 AM

Wow! I like your entry for Joseph's contest. You made me feeling like I was standing out in the rain feeling it's cool wet drops, and hearing the thunder. Great write.