Driving Under the Influence

“Your honor, after consulting with the District Attorney, we have agreed to a plea bargain agreement. The father, mother and sisters of the victim have requested that in lieu of a jail sentence, justice would better be served if my client be ordered to pay only restitution which would include the following”...
 
Walk back to that street
Crawl inside that wreck
Feel his last heartbeat
Touch his broken neck

Wake up in their dream
Face their blackest fears
Hear his mother scream
Weep their wretched tears

Stumble through their haze
Hate their morning lights
Trudge through empty days
Dread their sleepless nights

Cower on their edge
Hear their demons hiss
Slip upon their ledge
Fall in their abyss

Toe the line you crossed
Bear the cross you made
Lose what they have lost
Pay the price they paid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Negron Flores Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Congratulations Tim on the placement of the contest.
A  Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 12:07 PM
Tim, congrats on your win in Rob Carmack's contest. SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 9:46 PM
Congrats on huge win Tim with this superb write!
A  Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 11:53 PM
TIM, :) Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE
Onyema Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 12:39 PM
wow... this is very touching. Sometimes we really need to walk the shoes of those we hurt.... Good read!
Wigley Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 4:22 AM
A suitable bitterness, stylishly done. I get the feeling this inspiration may have been close to home, Tim. Well done. Regards, Viv
Ryerson Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Thanks Viv! Your comments are always uplifting and unique (and sometimes very witty and funny) and yes, you are correct...This poem hits VERY close to home...Thanks again - Tim
A  Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 3:37 PM
I like the twist
Ryerson Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 5:18 PM
So you like to Twist too? Well then, we'll have to go out dancing sometime...Thanks dear lady...I am still blown away (and honored) that you took the time to comment on so many of my poems
A   Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 8:44 PM
Hello Tim, Congratulations on your well deserved winning poem.. Hail Yeah! to all the dragon slayer winners :-) :-) :-) *LINDA
May Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 9:02 AM
very well written counselor....congrats on your win
Gorelick Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 2:02 PM
This is a very special poem. If only...congrats on your win. BG
Richards Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 9:18 AM
Wow......such a sensitive and compelling poem, .......a different twist on Dragon Slayers.....and it should be brought to this contest....an every day disgrace, unfortunately! Great subject, Tim!
Konos Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 9:01 PM
Thank you for entering my contest
Guzzi Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 2:55 PM
Hey..I AM TO SATISFIED LOL.........now it says just what you wanted to say and the reader can hear it! GREAT revision! Now, send it of to MADD mothers against drunk driving ask them if they could use it to help the cause! Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 3:46 PM
Seems a worthy cause to put out for folks to view, to me Tim. In my younger days I have been known to make this irresponsible call of judment myself. Thank God I was never involved in an accident that took anyone's life. There is always that chance though. Thanks for your comments today! Sincerely, Moses
Golden Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 10:20 PM
Tim , this is an extraordinary piece. You are rapidly rising in the ranks of my favorites with this gripping, relevant write. SO much emotional torment expressed in the content. I know what it's like to feel this helpless, empty feeling of loss. You've captured the consequence of one selfish person's careless, selfish actions. Very, very well done. Donna
Owens Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 9:16 PM
Tim I read all your work. You're amazing. Thanks...a friend....Marty
Null Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 8:08 PM
Poets have a flaw, they never believe their work is good enough. Deb is right, this is very important subject matter and you presented it without flaw...Karla
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