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Poetic Form: Rhyme

Inspired: 2023 February 09

 

*1st Place*
Writing Challenge - D Words
Contest Judged: 2023 February 10
Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

 

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Water Drops Dripping Glass Close - Free photo on Pixabay

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O'er a vast horizon, a thunderstorm ignites bestill gloaming. A gripping disruption transform, despair owning. Flickering streaks rend the upper regions, shortly came the pouring, unleashing droplets like legions, ...it's rage roaring. The hazy mist that first visits my panes, now lines form from drizzling. Spots here and there, the dripping gains, serves a quisling. More and more the collection keeps draining upon my window panes, solely repeatedly raining, drips constant drains. A leather book opened filled with photos, e'er so oft a flipping, tissues of pain souls the shadows, teardrops dripping.

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Date: 2/21/2023 1:57:00 PM
Hilo, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - D Forms, well done, I like the image and audio, blessings, Constance
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Date: 11/5/2023 1:44:00 PM
As I'm retracing my poems tying up loose ends as to what I may have missed, my dear Constance, an admirable Aloha! Mahalo, William
Date: 2/11/2023 8:34:00 PM
wow great poetic writings; congrats for superb 1st placement
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Date: 2/11/2023 9:00:00 PM
Thanks very much, Mahtab, I appreciate it, Aloha, William
Date: 2/11/2023 4:31:00 PM
Back with congratulations on taking first place; this is a really well-written piece that demonstrates both skills and knowledge...dear friend.
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Date: 11/5/2023 2:42:00 PM
I seemed to have missed this one, Lasaad! I'm glad to have such rare souls as you, my friend! Aloha, William
Date: 2/11/2023 1:47:00 PM
I see you chose a word that fits in with the weather of the past few months here. Congratulations on the win. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/11/2023 3:17:00 PM
Hurricane season ends in November as our wet winter starts off our overcast days that heat up in May--ugh! Mahalo and Aloha, William
Date: 2/11/2023 11:26:00 AM
Oh my William. This is stunning! Congratulations on your top win! :)
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Date: 2/11/2023 3:11:00 PM
I am truly happy, Linda, of your approval and honoring words, Aloha, William
Date: 2/11/2023 6:50:00 AM
- Back with congratulations on your top first place in the contest, William :) -
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Date: 2/11/2023 8:01:00 AM
Mahalo, Anne-Lise, for your acts of grace, Aloha, William
Date: 2/10/2023 8:25:00 PM
Synchronisation of your poem and picture always whelms me. Tissues of pain ….teardrops dripping. Well deserved composition. Feeling so happy on your first place win. Best poem in this contest. Blessings and Best Wishes on your journey in life.
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Date: 2/10/2023 8:41:00 PM
Many thanks, Anisha, for your supportive words and commendable extolling, truly appreciate the blessing. Aloha, William
Date: 2/10/2023 5:45:00 PM
An exquisite write William - “When it’s raining in your heart, that’s when dripping teardrops start.” Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 2/10/2023 7:04:00 PM
Belle, your generous sentiments and praise are truly appreciated, thank you and Aloha, William
Date: 2/9/2023 1:56:00 PM
This is an excellent bit of writing. Regrets are unavoidable in life,  William. Your sophisticated metaphorical poetry had me feeling a little low; best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/9/2023 5:21:00 PM
Lasaad, you have truly fathomed its depths and your orchestrated expressions is well received, Aloha William
Date: 2/9/2023 12:12:00 PM
- Wow a deep metaphorical poem, William - Gave me a sad feeling ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/9/2023 12:30:00 PM
Intuitively, well said, Anne-Lise, pleasantries extended with Aloha, William
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