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...and the wind..! was, electric. there was water..! there was sun..! ...it was all renewable... the energy, powered, sustained, life..! Fossil liquids burning emitting toxins that was OUR mistake. From the day a human kick started wound up the first combustible engine..! The first spill in any ocean should have been our clue. It was what cigarettes was to lungs- -what alcohol was to brain cells. It was a human error, a human error so huge that like a mythical dragon assumed a life of its own consumed the will the power the limited minds of limited men. Unlike the giant beast veiled as nuclear power with its unlimited potential that would have wooed the minds of the greatest among us, oil from its inception had the smell of destruction on its breath. It would in its own way fulfil the prophecy the world would end with a whimper not a bang. We saw its horns its bright red skin its pitch fork but we signed up willingly ...and from that day on our eternal souls were damned.
24~10~2014

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Date: 10/26/2014 10:00:00 PM
I was actually more replying a comment on here, so heres an interesting tidbit, the ONLY country to reduce greenhouse gas emissions to 1994/95 levels as of 2014, has been the USA. The ones who didn't sign the Kyoto agreement Interesting!!!
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Date: 10/26/2014 9:56:00 PM
Oh sorry, I didn't mean it in a bad way, more explaining, hard to come across here sometimes in a few short words! You know I love your stuff, I was speaking more to general audience!!!! Cheers mate! and dam if that wasn't a great photo!
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Date: 10/26/2014 10:00:00 PM
You are a great guy Arthur. I did not take it in a bad way. No need to appologize I found your input intelligent and important. Thank You.
Date: 10/26/2014 9:43:00 PM
Try not using things like ummmm your computer, your car, and oh no heating the house anymore either, we are no where close to doomed, It might be an idea to also run around nude, alot of what we wear uses oil. Like all of nature we use it to be more productive, imagine the advances not made and the deaths caused without it. Great fiction though!
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Date: 10/26/2014 9:52:00 PM
I respect your opinion Arthur. There was no intention to offend. This piece is definetely dramatic and purposely over the top. Thank you for adding to the conversation. I can not argue any point you have made. This is a limited singular outlook that minimises the complexities of this topic. You have my heartfelt appologies.
Date: 10/26/2014 9:24:00 AM
really superb pen maurice love how you drew this piece
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Date: 10/26/2014 7:39:00 AM
The visual of the Exon Valdese in the desert added to the Apocolyptic feel of this piece. Fantastic write Maurice.
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Date: 10/25/2014 3:26:00 PM
I agree with Verlena down here . This is VERY powerful. WE are indeed doomed. what amazes me is how certain people in my own country take this all so very lightly. I really pity the future generations for what they will have to breathe in just 20 years from now. Maybe less. One thing really stunning in your poem likening this to a devil or dragon with the smell of destruction on its breath. My favorite part.
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Date: 10/25/2014 12:54:00 PM
Powerful write Maurice enjoyed. (7) Verlena
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Date: 10/24/2014 6:43:00 PM
Wow, Maurice...the topic of your poem is one that many think about, but your expressive words really bring it home like an explosion in the mind! Very intense. Sandra
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Date: 10/24/2014 4:28:00 PM
Wow, it's as if that picture was made just for this amazing poem. I am tongue tied after reading this brilliant futuristic yet oh so near doomsday prophesies.
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Date: 10/24/2014 3:55:00 PM
You've summed this up quite nicely, Maurice. We don't seem to understand what damage we're doing until it's too late. Poetry is a true teacher, enlightening all who read her lessons. Thanks for this one; it's a favorite now.
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Date: 10/24/2014 3:21:00 PM
Many of the disasters in the world both natural and human made,are cause if this oil whixh spills lots of blood on many a hand.So powerful this is,and a much needed poem in these days..
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Date: 10/24/2014 3:20:00 PM
I like the picture and the poem. Nice!
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Date: 10/24/2014 3:10:00 PM
Wow what a powerful write my friend! So much of our everyday life revolves around this liquid - I concur 100% with everything Tim and Cas have said! Hugs as ever Jan xxx
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Date: 10/24/2014 3:07:00 PM
Excellent my friend...So many things wrong in the world today because of oil....great piece
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Date: 10/24/2014 2:40:00 PM
WOW. that was intense. Such a truth in your words and the picture that you have put along with it, digs the soul deeper into the saddness knowing that this beast was created by race, be to better and stronger we have become weaker. Powerful poem my friend!
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