Driftwood

they tend to ebb and flow like driftwood my emotions joy, tears, cry and smile~~

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Date: 10/11/2010 10:58:00 PM

Hey Wilma, thnx for leaving comments on my writes. I appreciate it. ....xJimmy

Date: 10/10/2010 9:54:00 AM

Hon, you wouldn't be human if they didn't "ebb and flow." A very beautiful senryu, Wilma! I'm trying to catch up. Love, Carolyn

Date: 10/10/2010 6:14:00 AM

Your words hit home for past times in my life, you know what I mean my dear.....love Michael

Date: 10/9/2010 11:08:00 AM

I didn't know.... i had that effect on you :-) I love it girlfriend. I'll write you one too.

Date: 10/8/2010 7:57:00 PM

Emotions are powerful things. Your poem expresses this well and I like the simile of "driftwood" a lot. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Date: 10/8/2010 3:38:00 PM

They, PS; must ah not wanted me ta write my wired self this great day; so's I had ta soup "M" my comment here dear poet ! Much love, james

Date: 10/8/2010 9:51:00 AM

That's what emotions do Wilma, they indeed ebb and flow >> James

Date: 10/8/2010 7:08:00 AM

very nice write enjoyed and thanks for all your kind comments have a great weekend faleshia

Date: 10/7/2010 10:40:00 PM

Great concep in this little senryu, Wilma. How are you over there so far away!! LUv, Andrea

Date: 10/7/2010 1:08:00 PM

Very nice imagery you have penned in this write, Wilma. joy, tears, cry and smile have heavy ebb and tide