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Drifting Swan

quite far across unruffled blue lake small swan drifts with the gentle wind rippling so soft and calm over the folded porcelain wings as pure as bright flakes of snow waiting for zephyr to bring the call of the floating clouds in azure sky and fly ~~~~~~~~~""""~~~~~~~~""""~~~~~"""~~~~~~~ ~~~~"""~~~~~~~""""""~~~~~~~~"""~~~~~~"""~~~~

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Date: 4/9/2025 7:33:00 AM
Nice one Subimal! I love the shape with the rippling waves below. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/8/2025 5:48:00 PM
Very elegant! I feel inspired to work on my shapes. This is lovely.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/8/2025 10:05:00 PM
Thank you for your read. Wishing you all the best.

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