Drifting

Drifting quietly drifting Gently nudging clouds Floating in a pale blue ocean Oblivious to the crowds Peacefully adrift in nature Tranquillity reigns supreme Freedom to calmly breathe Harmonious and serene Drifting slowly drifting May it never cease Spirit and soul entwined Earthly being released

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/17/2022 6:22:00 PM

So precious. So sweet. So ethereal. Keep smiling, Gershon

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2022 3:27:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this calm dreamy work. I am glad I found it today. Sara

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 7/16/2022 7:13:00 PM

Hi Deb, As I read each line I could visualize and feel the peace and calmness. Drifting slowly drifting may it never cease. Just what I needed to read today. A beautiful and calm filled poem. I love it! This one is going straight into my faves. Enjoy your weekend my friend :-)