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Drift Away

I stumbled down the moonlit path To reach the sea of endless dream Where once a song of drowning love Fell soft upon the midnight sea With painted posies And paths untouched With summer love And waters' rush I dream a dream Of yesterday As peaceful waters' Drift away _______________________________ Sponsor - Broken Wings 'A Poem, I Wrote and Sent Drifting' Poetry Contest Entered 8-30-2017 10/09/2017

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Date: 6/21/2017 8:09:00 AM
Back to say, Congratulations ! :)
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Date: 6/20/2017 10:55:00 PM
What a wonderful way of drifting away. Congrats on your win with this fabulous poem, Rick.
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Date: 6/20/2017 6:56:00 PM
Congrats!!! Rick...very well executed my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/19/2017 4:10:00 PM
Nicely done! eloquently placed my friend. Enjoyed the read. Regards, Craig
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Date: 6/19/2017 2:12:00 PM
This was absolutely beautiful. Such and enchanting piece of writing. Really nicely done.
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Date: 6/19/2017 11:49:00 AM
WOW I can only agree with the others I'd love to see a few more stanzas and have it set to music:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/19/2017 11:32:00 AM
I'm with Heidi. WOW. Such a beautiful soothing write, Rick. Exquisite poetry!
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Date: 6/19/2017 11:20:00 AM
Wow Rick. This reads so perfectly smooth. Very nice poem this is. I enjoyed it a lot. :)
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