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Drenched By Passion In the Pouring Rain

I can feel the rain pouring down As I move closer into your embrace Caressing your face You stir in your own unique way Your fingers play their own special tune, As gently as only you can do Over curved roads, Under bridges, you reach the peak The passion and the rain, engrossed in a battle of their own In a race to decide, Who will drench me first…?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/10/2010 9:41:00 PM
oooh, i like that last part how you ended this. I think some of the judges like the "mention" on bottom of entries. (someone told me that once anyway) but I really can't see that it makes much difference. This was a great poem. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:18:00 PM
Nicely sensual! Lovely. Thank you for your sweet comments on mine :) Have a wonderful day/night! Hugs, Kris
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Date: 8/9/2010 6:59:00 PM
passionate...gives me ideas
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Date: 8/9/2010 11:01:00 AM
I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:48:00 AM
Hey Wilma! Yes Wilma, I agree with Linda-Marie! Thanks for you comment on "Spider Bill". I wanted to post it for John's Limerick contest but failed to do so, no idea whay! Funny that you met a German student. She could read you my German versions, hahaha!!! Will send you an email to inform you what had happened to me last Saturday! Enjoy your Tuesday!...Gert :)
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:46:00 AM
Exquisite Wilma.. simply wonderful analogy here in your lines.. your last verse is awesome my friend... such creativity to read to begin a happy week...to u ..with luv..
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Date: 8/9/2010 4:01:00 AM
Smile ~ Let's hope its the passion dear lady for, no one wishes to find themselves drenched in the pouring rain and believe me, "True Passion," is more fierce than Any storm could Ever be....Smile, and yet, time tells its tales and I, believe in fate ~ Thus, let "True Love" have its day...."My Love & Warmth to You & Yours Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Beautiful Day Dear Wilma;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/8/2010 9:28:00 PM
excellent poem, paints a whole picture in words for the reader. Harry
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Date: 8/8/2010 1:54:00 PM
I hope the passion drenches you first, Wilma. A lovely poem! Best wishes to you as your weekend comes to a close. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2010 12:28:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned..Unusual metaphoric language used..Sara
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