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Dreamy Winter Nights

When fall departs and winter's on its way,
my mind resets to face a colder clime.
As days grow short and evenings quickly gray
after the sun recedes post daytime's prime-
I think about those peaceful nights sublime
when winter storms will visit me in time.

Inside, from my embracing bed at night,
I'll watch the snowflakes neath the silver moon,
while tranquil scenes outside will bring delight.
As satin banks of snow and sky commune,
and swirls make patterns like a white sand dune-
I'll curl up peacefully in my cocoon.

Protected, safe from winter's icy blow,
as gusty winds drive flakes to twirl, enthrall,
I'll drift to sleep lulled softly by moonglow
and swaying tree-limb shadows on the wall.
Secure I'll be, in spite of winter's squall,
as it weaves a white landscape like a shawl.

So lovely will be winter's late-night scenes
that feed my sleep and make for peaceful dreams.


January 28, 2018

Premiere Contest: Winter Storm
Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 5:40 PM
Indeed a lovely night’s sleep, Sandra! I'll curl up peacefully in my cocoon too! Congratulations!
Fowler Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 3:40 PM
Congratulations on the win Sandra! Linda
Roper Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win, great imagery and the written flow on these poem. Hugs Eve
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February 1, 2021 at 11:22 AM
You can come over and read me poetry and I will be sure to fall asleep in the serenity of your words, so tranquil so good. Congrats on your win dear Sandra. This is quite a work of art.
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February 27, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations on your wins Sandra! What a beautiful sonnet ... such a lovely way to look at winter :) Best, Judy
Ashley Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Sandra, your lovely poem is expressed in superbly poetic lines of beautiful imagery and fantastic rhymes. I so enjoyed the cozy content of your enchanting write. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win. Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Dear Susan, thank you once again for your very expressive and supportive comments and congratulations. Your positive words are so much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 4:32 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 6:33 PM
Thank you, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 2:32 PM
This beauty was a little masterpiece Sandra, and I'm so happy to see it in first place! Congratulations to you my friend! : )
Haight Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 6:32 PM
Thank you, Connie! I so much appreciate your visit and your uplifting and supportive comments! Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 1:42 PM
This is a model for any rhyme contest congrats Sandra, queen of rhyme!!
Haight Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 6:31 PM
John, thank you again for another great contest! I am so pleased that you liked my poem and I appreciate my wonderful placement! Sandra :)
Scars Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 9:42 AM
loved the imagery sweet Sandra, beautiful rhythm and rhyme. great poem thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 11:50 AM
Thank you again, Laura, for another great contest. So pleased that you liked my poem, and I appreciate the nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:47 AM
Delightful read. Congrats on your winning poem. Well done, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 11:50 AM
Thank you very much, Line. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 11:40 PM
beautiful imagery, Sandra, makes me feel warm under my blankets.. love the write
Haight Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 4:36 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for your lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra
Sands Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 10:18 AM
Very well written. Beautiful :)
Haight Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 4:36 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
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