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The slow sun sets, the night ebony dark, Silvery moon shines brightly, dreamy mood. I stroll carefully, nimble like a lark. In glad, dreamy, indulgent solitude, Admiring the mood in tame attitude. Brightness around the moon circles delight, For a moment I try to clear my sight Am I hearing a melodious tune? I fight with my senses, all should be right. I watch. It is the Lady of the Moon. 3 February 2022 D Forms - Dizain- Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 10 lines each with 10 syllables. Rhymes checked with Rhyme Zone.

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Lynn D.

Date: 2/19/2022 8:01:00 AM

Intelligent! Imaginative! Well written!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/15/2022 10:32:00 AM

This is the definition of "dreamy" Victor - a walk on a moonlit night with the "Lady of the Moon." Wonderful thought about indulging ourselves in the beauty of a moonlit night. Double congratulations coming your way for the POTD and your win in this contest! Blessings!

Constance La France

Date: 2/15/2022 8:48:00 AM

Victor, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor with your beautiful poem ~ Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/15/2022 8:30:00 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on this win. Your "Dreamy Night" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 2/14/2022 6:14:00 PM

Revisiting to send this poem to my faves, Victor.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 2/14/2022 5:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win, Victor. Your depiction of a dreamy moonlit night is captivating to the senses. Wonderful! BW ~ Mala

Constance La France

Date: 2/14/2022 3:05:00 PM

Victor, congratulations on your First Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your excellent and I like your image too ~ Constance

Andrew John

Date: 2/14/2022 1:35:00 AM

A lovely way to see the moon. (We have a full moon on Wed, 16.02.22.)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/11/2022 7:46:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD, Victor!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/10/2022 11:06:00 AM

A lovely and a dreamy depiction of a captivating mysterious night. This is one form which I still need to tackle; I like its rhyme scheme. ~ Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award, Victor. // Regards // paul

Ann Peck

Date: 2/10/2022 10:36:00 AM

Lovely poem, Victor. I like "Lady of the Moon." Best of luck in contest. We both put some magic in our entries :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/8/2022 1:56:00 PM

Quite a beautiful Dizain Victor; well done.

Mike Bayles

Date: 2/6/2022 11:45:00 AM

Such, a nice, peaceful poem. The rhyme is great, and it casts a great spell on me.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/6/2022 8:31:00 AM

Returning with my congratulations on receiving the distinction of POTD for your outstanding poem, Victor. Warm wishes and regards to you; I hope you are doing well.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/6/2022 5:43:00 AM

Hi Victor, many congrats on being awarded the honor of POTD for this awesome poem Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/5/2022 7:52:00 PM

Victor,Back to congratulate you on POTD. It was a well deserved win. (Fav) Blessings ~ Debra

Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/5/2022 4:34:00 AM

Good Afternoon Victor - I just wanted to return to say congratulations on POTD. It is deserved because this is poetry with illusion and imagery. Love and Blessings always. Remain safe (smile)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 2/4/2022 11:18:00 PM

Such wonderful poetry dear Victor, congratulations on a well deserved POTD, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/4/2022 10:08:00 PM

Excellent poetry, a well deserved POTD.

Michael Tor

Date: 2/4/2022 7:31:00 PM

Creativity at its best Victor. Congratulations.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 2/4/2022 1:37:00 PM

Beautiful poem Victor! Congrats on POTD!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/4/2022 11:28:00 AM

When all the world is quiet, and the "Silvery moon shines brightly" a "dreamy mood" seems to softly linger. I completely agree, my sweet friend. This is so beautiful and romantic. Your words leave me in awe. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/4/2022 10:06:00 AM

Wonderful, congratulations on POTD Victor!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 2/4/2022 9:59:00 AM

Superb Dizain, Victor. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.

Joseph May

Date: 2/4/2022 9:32:00 AM

Wonderful write Victor, Congrats on POTD