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Dreamy Night

The slow sun sets, the night ebony dark,
     Silvery moon shines brightly, dreamy mood.
I stroll carefully, nimble like a lark.
     In glad, dreamy, indulgent solitude,
Admiring the mood in tame attitude.
Brightness around the moon circles delight,
For a moment I try to clear my sight
     Am I hearing a melodious tune?
I fight with my senses, all should be right.
     I watch. It is the Lady of the Moon.

3 February 2022
D Forms - Dizain- Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France 

10 lines each with 10 syllables.
Rhymes checked with Rhyme Zone.

Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2022

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Lynn D. Date: 2/19/2022 8:01:00 AM Intelligent! Imaginative! Well written! Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 2/15/2022 10:32:00 AM This is the definition of "dreamy" Victor - a walk on a moonlit night with the "Lady of the Moon." Wonderful thought about indulging ourselves in the beauty of a moonlit night. Double congratulations coming your way for the POTD and your win in this contest! Blessings! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 2/15/2022 8:48:00 AM Victor, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor with your beautiful poem ~ Constance Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/15/2022 8:30:00 AM Back with "Congratulations" on this win. Your "Dreamy Night" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.................. Login to Reply

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 2/14/2022 6:14:00 PM Revisiting to send this poem to my faves, Victor. Login to Reply

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 2/14/2022 5:00:00 PM Congratulations on your top win, Victor. Your depiction of a dreamy moonlit night is captivating to the senses. Wonderful! BW ~ Mala Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 2/14/2022 3:05:00 PM Victor, congratulations on your First Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your excellent and I like your image too ~ Constance Login to Reply

Andrew John Date: 2/14/2022 1:35:00 AM A lovely way to see the moon. (We have a full moon on Wed, 16.02.22.) Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/11/2022 7:46:00 PM Congratulations on POTD, Victor! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 2/10/2022 11:06:00 AM A lovely and a dreamy depiction of a captivating mysterious night. This is one form which I still need to tackle; I like its rhyme scheme. ~ Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award, Victor. // Regards // paul Login to Reply

Ann Peck Date: 2/10/2022 10:36:00 AM Lovely poem, Victor. I like "Lady of the Moon." Best of luck in contest. We both put some magic in our entries :) Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 2/8/2022 1:56:00 PM Quite a beautiful Dizain Victor; well done. Login to Reply

Mike Bayles Date: 2/6/2022 11:45:00 AM Such, a nice, peaceful poem. The rhyme is great, and it casts a great spell on me. Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 2/6/2022 8:31:00 AM Returning with my congratulations on receiving the distinction of POTD for your outstanding poem, Victor. Warm wishes and regards to you; I hope you are doing well. Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 2/6/2022 5:43:00 AM Hi Victor, many congrats on being awarded the honor of POTD for this awesome poem Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Debra L Brown Date: 2/5/2022 7:52:00 PM Victor,Back to congratulate you on POTD. It was a well deserved win. (Fav) Blessings ~ Debra Login to Reply

Lisa Ricci Date: 2/5/2022 4:34:00 AM Good Afternoon Victor - I just wanted to return to say congratulations on POTD. It is deserved because this is poetry with illusion and imagery. Love and Blessings always. Remain safe (smile) Login to Reply

Ann Gilmour Date: 2/4/2022 11:18:00 PM Such wonderful poetry dear Victor, congratulations on a well deserved POTD, with kindest thoughts Ann xx Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 2/4/2022 10:08:00 PM Excellent poetry, a well deserved POTD. Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 2/4/2022 7:31:00 PM Creativity at its best Victor. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Jennifer Fenn Date: 2/4/2022 1:37:00 PM Beautiful poem Victor! Congrats on POTD! Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 2/4/2022 11:28:00 AM When all the world is quiet, and the "Silvery moon shines brightly" a "dreamy mood" seems to softly linger. I completely agree, my sweet friend. This is so beautiful and romantic. Your words leave me in awe. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 2/4/2022 10:06:00 AM Wonderful, congratulations on POTD Victor! Login to Reply

L Milton Hankins Date: 2/4/2022 9:59:00 AM Superb Dizain, Victor. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 2/4/2022 9:32:00 AM Wonderful write Victor, Congrats on POTD Login to Reply

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