Victor Buhagiar Poet Dizain

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Dreamy Night

The slow sun sets, the night ebony dark,
     Silvery moon shines brightly, dreamy mood.
I stroll carefully, nimble like a lark.
     In glad, dreamy, indulgent solitude,
Admiring the mood in tame attitude.
Brightness around the moon circles delight,
For a moment I try to clear my sight
     Am I hearing a melodious tune?
I fight with my senses, all should be right.
     I watch. It is the Lady of the Moon.

3 February 2022
D Forms - Dizain- Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France 

10 lines each with 10 syllables.
Rhymes checked with Rhyme Zone.

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Lynn D. February 19, 2022 at 8:01 AM Intelligent! Imaginative! Well written!

Sam Kauffman February 15, 2022 at 10:32 AM This is the definition of "dreamy" Victor - a walk on a moonlit night with the "Lady of the Moon." Wonderful thought about indulging ourselves in the beauty of a moonlit night. Double congratulations coming your way for the POTD and your win in this contest! Blessings!

Constance La France February 15, 2022 at 8:48 AM Victor, congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor with your beautiful poem ~ Constance

Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2022 at 8:30 AM Back with "Congratulations" on this win. Your "Dreamy Night" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Malabika Ray Choudhury February 14, 2022 at 6:14 PM Revisiting to send this poem to my faves, Victor.

Malabika Ray Choudhury February 14, 2022 at 5:00 PM Congratulations on your top win, Victor. Your depiction of a dreamy moonlit night is captivating to the senses. Wonderful! BW ~ Mala

Constance La France February 14, 2022 at 3:05 PM Victor, congratulations on your First Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your excellent and I like your image too ~ Constance

Andrew John February 14, 2022 at 1:35 AM A lovely way to see the moon. (We have a full moon on Wed, 16.02.22.)

Kim Rodrigues February 11, 2022 at 7:46 PM Congratulations on POTD, Victor!

Paul Callus February 10, 2022 at 11:06 AM A lovely and a dreamy depiction of a captivating mysterious night. This is one form which I still need to tackle; I like its rhyme scheme. ~ Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award, Victor. // Regards // paul

Ann Peck February 10, 2022 at 10:36 AM Lovely poem, Victor. I like "Lady of the Moon." Best of luck in contest. We both put some magic in our entries :)

M. L. Kiser February 8, 2022 at 1:56 PM Quite a beautiful Dizain Victor; well done.

Mike Bayles February 6, 2022 at 11:45 AM Such, a nice, peaceful poem. The rhyme is great, and it casts a great spell on me.

Sotto Poet February 6, 2022 at 8:31 AM Returning with my congratulations on receiving the distinction of POTD for your outstanding poem, Victor. Warm wishes and regards to you; I hope you are doing well.

Jennifer Proxenos February 6, 2022 at 5:43 AM Hi Victor, many congrats on being awarded the honor of POTD for this awesome poem Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.

Debra L Brown February 5, 2022 at 7:52 PM Victor,Back to congratulate you on POTD. It was a well deserved win. (Fav) Blessings ~ Debra

Lisa Ricci February 5, 2022 at 4:34 AM Good Afternoon Victor - I just wanted to return to say congratulations on POTD. It is deserved because this is poetry with illusion and imagery. Love and Blessings always. Remain safe (smile)

Ann Gilmour February 4, 2022 at 11:18 PM Such wonderful poetry dear Victor, congratulations on a well deserved POTD, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Harry Horsman February 4, 2022 at 10:08 PM Excellent poetry, a well deserved POTD.

Michael Tor February 4, 2022 at 7:31 PM Creativity at its best Victor. Congratulations.

Jennifer Fenn February 4, 2022 at 1:37 PM Beautiful poem Victor! Congrats on POTD!

Brandy Nicole February 4, 2022 at 11:28 AM When all the world is quiet, and the "Silvery moon shines brightly" a "dreamy mood" seems to softly linger. I completely agree, my sweet friend. This is so beautiful and romantic. Your words leave me in awe. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy

Tania Kitchin February 4, 2022 at 10:06 AM Wonderful, congratulations on POTD Victor!

L Milton Hankins February 4, 2022 at 9:59 AM Superb Dizain, Victor. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.

Joseph May February 4, 2022 at 9:32 AM Wonderful write Victor, Congrats on POTD

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