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For the Dreams Within Dreams Poetry Contest of Unseeking Seeker

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Line of inquiry: “Thought streams manifested the dream I was both subject and object Methinks things are not what they seem Which illusion do we reject” - from Unseeking Seeker Dreams within dreams (within dreams?) I wonder what any of it means. I remember a night of slumber from which I awoke all of a sudden. Across from me on my bed was the little dog I’d been forced to let go. A grateful disbelief entered my head, for I’d loved my small dog so. Into my open arms he leapt, and to my chest my little dog’s body I gladly pressed. His beautiful fur I could both smell and feel. He’d been gone from my life a short while. How could this all be real? Flooded with joy, I stroked his fur. What happened next is kind of a blur. I was back into a dream wandering on a street along with my beloved pet who’d given me many years of a love unconditional and sweet. The vision of that night has stayed - my love and a dog’s love for me. Can it last for an eternity? When I was forced to give him up, my darling dog had been growing old. Maybe that night he had died, and his soul had returned to me so that his soft fluffy body I’d gotten one last chance to hold before he’d go on to Rainbow Bridge. Could that night’s visit have been an illusion? To me that just doesn't seem correct. Having buried my face in my dear dog’s fur, this notion I reject. Some may say my belief is a delusion. I, however, have reached my own differing conclusion.

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Date: 11/23/2024 11:06:00 AM
Heartfelt piece Andrea. I know you loved your little dog. They are family to us and are precious. Thanks for sharing. Hugs...
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Date: 11/23/2024 7:49:00 AM
A very interesting dream. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/23/2024 9:33:00 AM
Thanks. I am hoping one part was actually not a dream
Date: 11/20/2024 10:43:00 AM
A sweet poem.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/23/2024 9:33:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 11/20/2024 8:13:00 AM
Hi Andrea, that was most certainly a dream within a dream, sometimes I think life is just a dream. Good luck in the contest. Xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/23/2024 9:34:00 AM
For some this life is a nightmare. The afterlife is really something to look forward to.
Date: 11/19/2024 4:40:00 PM
a dream within a dream within a dream, i like the proposition very much, after all may be dreams are true, enjoyed your poem poet andrea, my parents had many dogs i can relate too, some disappeared
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/19/2024 7:58:00 PM
Thanks , Yann. Sorry some of your dogs disappeared
Date: 11/19/2024 3:19:00 PM
So sweet- I had a cat I loved like that. Hope you are reunited with your dog one day! But until then, hope you have many more years of living and sharing your poetry- <3
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/19/2024 7:57:00 PM
Thanks, Paige. I had a cat I felt strongly for too. She was SO good
Date: 11/19/2024 3:02:00 PM
Hello Andrea, Wow! now that is a dream that felt o real to you. At least you did not wake up scared like I did. My cat on one side of me. On the other side i felt a body beside me. I woke up fast. Looked around nothing was there. it took me a long time to get back to sleep. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/20/2024 10:06:00 AM
Hello Andrea, i am still trying to figure out the dream. yes yours is scary. It is a good thing it was a dream. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/19/2024 7:56:00 PM
That sure is scary. Mine was too wonderful to be just a dream!

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