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To find dreams in dreams of the subconscious where reverie in the mind finds changes this sensory realm often feels spacious in the fleeting illusions through its mazes perhaps perception is more purposeful when we wander through dreams unrecognized searching for dreams within dreams more peaceful then dreams too misty to characterize as dreams turn into dreams to dream again and are reality till' awaken finding it's a shadowed time we are in as we sleep through dreamy thoughts forsaken to dream a dream within we come to rest inside we find a refuge as its guest

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Date: 11/23/2024 7:54:00 AM
"to dream a dream within we come to rest inside we find a refuge as its guest" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/22/2024 2:58:00 AM
What a wonderful poem, Frederic. I enjoyed it so much! I think you really built to a wonderful climax at the end. So many lines here spoke to me. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/19/2024 10:11:00 AM
- Some dreams feel more real than others ... and the dream stays in your mind for a long time - Lovely poem, Frederic :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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