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Dreams of Writing - 5 Line Contest

I dreamt of dripping tears in my dream, And silent verses floated noiselessly as butterflies; These dreams like ghosts from the past my writing themes, O, there is a sweetness and beauty amid the tears of tragedies, My life sad but still lovely as a garden ravaged that weeps and sighs. -------------------------------------------------- June 14, 2015 Quintain For the contest, Five Lines, Metaphors and Smile, sponsor, Sara Kendrick First Place

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Date: 6/30/2015 10:49:00 PM
Broken Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:08:00 AM
I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it of superb quality. Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/29/2015 10:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Constance. All were winners, but this was A WINNER!!!!
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Date: 6/29/2015 6:38:00 PM
B.W., congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs dear friend Eve
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Date: 6/16/2015 10:19:00 AM
love this one - the last line is just awesome
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Date: 6/15/2015 4:08:00 PM
nicely done, sweetie. I think this contest is a really nice one and am surprised it is not filling faster. My poem is "waiting in the wings."
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Date: 6/15/2015 1:50:00 AM
Enjoyed, Broken, wishing you luck. SKAT
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Date: 6/14/2015 2:27:00 PM
Constance, there is beauty in your lines....That last line so touched my heart. I know that pain is a close companion of beauty. Good luck in the contest, Dear. Hugs
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Book: Shattered Sighs