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Dreams of Louisiana

Dimly lit, I sit
in a Mexican kitchen
near the Tropic of Cancer.
A TV is tuned
to inane noises;
dogs at my feet,
oranges in a bowl
on a table:
a specific place and time.
And I am dreaming --
dreaming of Louisiana
in twilight hours --
dreaming of short winter days and
summer's green, bright mornings.
Country time, mostly empty,
was quiet, seldom interrupted
by human utterance;
but my busy brain
was full of fantasy
and subterfuge.
The world was new, big,
and yet to be explored;
possibilities seemed endless.
Oak and cypress,
willows, pines -- and magnolias --
were all around, and cane fields
stretched for miles.
Change was slow in coming
and childhood lasted long.
The bayous that had always been there
were there still.
I dream now of Louisiana:
poignant vignettes... dreamy glimpses...
all those slowly fading
recalled moments
of the past...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 2, 2018 at 2:54 AM
Hi Leo.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This poem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings!
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April 7, 2015 at 8:07 PM
You have painted a marvelous portrait of Louisiana with your words, oaks, cypress, willows and pines... I have always loved the sweet scent of magnolias, and the taste of fresh sugar cane. Oh Yes, this write is truly divine. I thank you for sharing such beautiful memories. :-) 7+++
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October 31, 2014 at 9:18 PM
Nostalgia dreams of home perhaps?? Love my home state of Louisiana !! I've never ventured far from it for any length of time. Leaves are beginning to turn, those first scatterings of color among the green... cooler nights and cooler days greet us this time of year. Mosquitos not as bad in the fall as spring or summer. I miss the magnolia that grew where I once lived, but find comfort in the woods that surrounds as well as nature's voice, not yet drowned out by what mankind calls progress.
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October 29, 2014 at 8:36 AM
I love the feel of this piece, being one place and your mind in another. You brought us along with you. You are a gifted writer.
Pettit Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 11:25 PM
Never have been to Louisiana. How are they doing after Katrina hit? You describe the place very well in your work.
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February 18, 2014 at 9:50 PM
So you grew up in Louisiana and now you reside in Mexico? I think both places sound really great!! well, it depends where you are in Mexico. I would sure love to see the coastal parts of it. I miss Iowa the way you miss LA. I really enjoyed that longing feeling in the poem.
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January 20, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Loved It Leo! I love Louisiana! If u get a chance, check out my "Angelene" my best, chuck
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