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Dreams Minichu

The subconscious mind drifts Wefting then weaving thoughts into intricate tales Known world shifts Strange ideas Seemingly real, placed details Show fears Cascades Waking curtails Fades Subconscious mind drifts Seemingly real, placed details Fades

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2023 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/24/2023 3:21:00 PM

Thank you x

Paige Hind

Date: 10/23/2023 8:30:00 PM

Very dreamy... love it!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/23/2023 11:12:00 PM

These are really fun to do once you get your head round them, thanks you your comment x

Speaks Volumes

Date: 10/22/2023 1:40:00 AM

Impeccable ! Its perfect D. I love it. A Fave for sure. YOU are always so good at these.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/22/2023 1:57:00 AM

I hope you'll just as quick tell me I've done a duff write :) I appreciate you SV! There's a whole load of good ones for this - it's a perfect form for dreams

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/21/2023 2:44:00 PM

Your poem had a dreamlike, almost surreal quality to it. The rhyme scheme flowed and I found myself relating to the 'seemingly real' of the subconscious mind. Nicely done, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/21/2023 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Sara, it's an unusual form Minichu but can create interesting results. I only attempt it for contests though. Thank you for your comment x

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/21/2023 9:20:00 AM

Dear Dilly Dally, your dreamy pen spills with enchantment upon the poetic page. Your expressive artistry shines in this amazing poem. I adore my dream world and I admire how you've described it. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/21/2023 11:31:00 AM

Thank you Susan, your kindness with your comments is uplifting. I appreciate you taking time with my poem x