Dreams For a Moment

Tonight I closed my eyes to pray
God.. let me feel, hear, and touch
Remove earth's blinders from me 
Oh vulnerability... almost too much

Suddenly,
Your dreams for a moment.. felt
Such beauty I can't describe
Love's song unleashed in me
Lyrics danced and wouldn't hide

Star's wonder, I now could touch
Each of them knew your name 
We embraced, I saw you there
Felt things that can't be tamed

Heaven's breeze began to speak
Your sacred secrets into my ear
Caressing my heart into belief
She's yours, if only.. stay near

Your dreams for a moment.. felt
Sweet dreams carried on the wind 
Such a fierce and breathless love
Two hearts, now one...
... we'll never end!

~Lyric Man

Note: This write is an echo lyric to Maia Lewis' "If For A Moment" (you must go and read it!). My song is about a guy who answers that "if" question, by asking God to allow him to feel, hear, and touch what's going on inside the heart of a particular girl.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/18/2018 6:14:00 AM
So beautiful Lyric, you write beautifully. Do you sing?
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Date: 7/18/2018 7:38:00 AM
I do sing professionally and otherwise. I'm rarely not singing. People tease me about it. I don't even realize I'm singing. I like to whistle too (thus the whistle shout out in 'Midnight Without You'. Thank you for reading my lyrics. My joy is found in bring joy to others!
Date: 7/9/2018 8:17:00 AM
This is beautiful
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:43:00 AM
If only we could see whats in others hearts....lovely!
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Date: 7/3/2018 9:42:00 AM
aww you got religion in your soul
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Date: 6/28/2018 5:53:00 AM
First verse is my favorite! To love, we must be vulnerable. I think that’s why older couples often become closer...because they’ve finally given themselves to each other. <3 Kim
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Date: 6/27/2018 12:00:00 PM
Just wow, a simplistic sweet serenade. This is so Devine. Loving your style..may in the near future could we collab on some lyrics/poems. Thank you for sharing your gift..Blessings There's praise in words and words in praise James
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Date: 6/27/2018 7:23:00 AM
LM.....You are a song writer ESQ!
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Date: 6/26/2018 10:48:00 PM
So many visits … so many lovely comments … Makes me (almost) want to start listening to contemporary pop music again. You da man, Lyric Man. Keep pouring out your soul … :) :) gw
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Date: 6/26/2018 7:08:00 AM
My friend you truly are the Lyric Man. This is really lovely. A very touching and moving piece. Bravo again. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/26/2018 7:03:00 AM
Beautiful dreams Lyric man..your tender words touch the stars and the heavens..bringing two hearts together.
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Date: 6/26/2018 6:44:00 AM
When love is the subject matter the Cosmos plays its role for our dreams to come true! A heavenly writing with much feeling and romanticism my friend, Lyric Man! Powerful and inspiring!
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Date: 6/26/2018 4:16:00 AM
Expressed very deeply..
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Date: 6/25/2018 11:12:00 PM
What a beautiful write LM, I love how you transport us into that world! Just love it ;) enjoy the week ahead
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Date: 6/25/2018 9:37:00 PM
Another rhyme of love and devotion that I almost wilt in afterglow. Your muse has sprouted wings and flown to that hidden realm where such rhymes await, already written, and brought to mind just for you.
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Date: 6/25/2018 8:34:00 PM
Wonderful echo
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Date: 6/25/2018 8:25:00 PM
Wonderful lyric, Lyric Man, an inspirational prayer with hope immersed in your dream.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/25/2018 8:23:00 PM
A very endearing romantic write Lyric Man!~Che :)
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