DREAMS

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March- 22-2025

Bitesize. No105. Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Line Gauthier

Wow…! How, I wish it were true! but sad, it’s only a dream yet I will ascend the spiral stairs to the sky! Oh dreams, you winged beauties, without thee what an arid desert, life would be!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2025 4:08:00 AM

It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Life isn't a dream we are deeply involved in it. Thanks for sharing these lines with us. Sara K

Jay Narain

Date: 3/22/2025 10:43:00 AM

Dream creates a future life. Well penned.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/22/2025 4:57:00 AM

Dear sweet valsa, so true, without dreams life will be so dull and so blank, and youv written a very heartfelt verse that not only flows with emotions but also is woven with such subtle alliterations and wordplay , painting imagery in such an ethereal manner! Pleasure reading you today! Best wishes in the contest, sending you light always

Silent One

Date: 3/22/2025 4:34:00 AM

Very true we need to have dreams so we have the ambition to achieve something... They give us hope and they keep us close to faith.. great selection of lines for this contest.. All the best my friend... Peace and Blessings..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/22/2025 3:28:00 AM

A pity we can't stay asleep forever and live in those happy dreams. Good luck in the contest Valsa, enjoy the weekend. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/22/2025 3:13:00 AM

Pity I can't copy your dreams. So delicious, dear Valsa.

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/22/2025 1:34:00 AM

what a delicious poem, me either couldn't live without dreams, romances or else, your brilliant poem touched me