Dreams

Staring out the window again This time with his best friend The cold stares back at them Revealing why his feet are numb He dreams of going out to play But saves his wishes for another day When sunshine allows for warmth After a melted world has formed. 9/2/19 Based on Photo Number 1 Free Verse or Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2019 3:33:00 PM

Regina, congratulations on your win … thank you so much for participating in my contest. Hugs Eve

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 9:37:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win! This one made me think and think again Regina.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2019 12:13:00 PM

- You chose the same picture as me ... but totally different ... a lovely poem, Regina :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2019 5:44:00 PM

oh you did the picture poem SO well. I like your interpretation of it.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/4/2019 12:16:00 AM

Hi Regina, I see you had a long break with Poetry soup, glad you are back - this poem is deep and thought provoking write - ' after a melted world has formed' - great imagery. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/3/2019 11:23:00 PM

I don't know which contest is this for, but I loved the second stanza.... great job.