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Dreams

Moon rise spherical, glacier white, sheds mask of clouds for orb of pale light Dark blue symphony hums its low cadence in song to whispering mist Winds wafting breath slows, pauses to gentle pulse of sleep The fireplace holds minuscule specks of red embers Downy covers cocoon, soothes, comforting rest Time melts, weary souls settle Heavy-lidded eyes close The walls dissolve Softens into Dreams

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Date: 4/19/2018 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/17/2018 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Michelle .. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/17/2018 12:03:00 PM
- Best wishes and congratulations with your 3rd place in the contest, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/17/2018 11:25:00 AM
what a dream of a poem Michelle, the imagery is so soothing, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/17/2018 10:46:00 AM
Congrats on your bronze medal finish with this lovely dreamy poem, Michelle.
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Date: 4/16/2018 3:15:00 AM
Nice dreams. Kai
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/16/2018 8:17:00 AM
Thank you, Kai!
Date: 4/3/2018 3:57:00 PM
This is a lullaby on paper. It could put almost everyone to sleep.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/6/2018 9:56:00 AM
I love it that you caught that, Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/3/2018 4:10:00 PM
I hope you mean "put everyone to sleep" in a good way - just kidding! - thanks again, caren.
Date: 4/3/2018 3:47:00 PM
Drowsy,...drifting,...down into...dreaminess! Wonderful poem, Michelle. So well-crafted. Kudos. :)gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/3/2018 4:11:00 PM
much thanks, as always - hope you had a good Passover!
Date: 4/3/2018 9:34:00 AM
As an enchanted sleep spell of beautiful imagery, I was relaxed and could have eased into sleep. Keep reading, commenting and definitely writing! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/3/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment!

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