Dreamland

Dreamland Walk with me in the land of dreams walk with me in peace Where the grass is green, the sky is blue where wonders never cease Hand in hand we'll explore this place together you and me Til morning light begins the day til we're no longer free. (sweet dreams everyone) (my archives - June 1979)

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White Wolf

Date: 5/4/2017 10:31:00 PM

The title of this one intrigued me, so I just had to peruse! This one reminds me of the Celtic Otherworld called Tir na nOg. Or the 'Land of the youth.' Funny enough I just wrote a haiku poem on reality and dreams! Lovely penmanship, Lenna!

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/7/2017 12:28:00 AM

Thank you and I completely get that. I noticed I have discovered several writers due to being intrigued by the titles on their work :) . I do know that sometimes the title can fool you though, haha

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/4/2017 4:01:00 PM

Hello Lenna. As I am the forever dreamer I turned to this entry. Your words are poetic and gentle. I very much like your style. I will return again soon. Well done

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/4/2017 5:37:00 PM

Hi Lisa :) Yes, most of us are dreamers to some extent. You are so kind to comment on my style and I'm happy you will return. Never stop dreaming Lisa :) Have a wonderful evening.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/4/2017 2:47:00 PM

Very sweet poem Lenna

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/4/2017 5:41:00 PM

Thank You Tim, YOU are very sweet for saying so !! Enjoy your evening :)

Darren White

Date: 5/4/2017 7:08:00 AM

I love this Lenna, I also like it how you wish us sweet dreams, that reminds me of someone :)

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/4/2017 11:36:00 AM

Thank You Darren :) Since the poem was about dreaming, I added that after I posted. I am happy you liked it !!

Chris Green

Date: 5/4/2017 6:02:00 AM

Beautiful Lenna and so nice to read. Once more, the flow is smooth and soft and the rhyme scheme is wonderful. I wish more would come and read you. You are very talented my friend.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/4/2017 12:01:00 PM

Thank you my friend, for your uplifting words. :) Very nice of you to say. I hold your opinion in high regard as your talent far exceeds mine. I have been learning more about forms and syllable content on this site, which I haven't paid much attention to in the past. Yes, it would be great to have more readers that offer up their comments/opinions for sure.

Joseph May

Date: 5/4/2017 4:54:00 AM

Sweet dreams Lenna..Wonderful write

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/4/2017 11:46:00 AM

Thank You Joseph, you are kind. Your visit and comment is appreciated :)