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Dreaming Out Loud

It's the first day of the rest of our lives Beginning as it usually does But this one seems a little bit different The world is all abuzz It's all abuzz with great excitement Something's about to take place Have us guys finally realized the big truth We're destroying the human race Since the very beginning of time, it seems Wars have forever been fought Over land, religion, and ideologies In a web of destruction, we're caught A day of awakening is about to take place We're finally going to see the light From this day forward wars will be banished Peace will be finally in sight Am I dreaming or what? Can this be true? Pinch me to make sure I'm awake Let's hope this time it's more than a dream But reality, for all our sakes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/22/2018 9:21:00 AM
What a wonderfully written poem Jack, all our dreams and wishes would come true when this takes place....Maria xoxo
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/22/2018 10:41:00 AM
What a wonderful state... everything comes up roses!!! Hope you have a dream like day dear sweet Maria!!! Love and love and more love, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 5/22/2018 7:26:00 AM
You're doing your part to make it a reality my sweet friend. <3 <3 <3
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/22/2018 7:54:00 AM
What would I do without your cheery and always positive words to wake up to!!! Happy day! XOX
Date: 5/22/2018 6:13:00 AM
Hi Jack, I enjoyed reading your beautifully written poem, I certainly share your dream of peace but unfortunately that’s what it is, well written. :))
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/22/2018 7:52:00 AM
Very true but gonna keep hopin' my friend!!! :))

Book: Shattered Sighs