Dreaming Love

Eyes brown
Fixated in them
All of me

A soft sound
And in them
I dream

What I found
Surreal it
May seem

In love I drown
And in them
I gleam

© Rohaan Suresh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Karim Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 4:18 PM
Beautiful poem!
Suresh Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Thanks Ayesha! Really appreciate it
A   Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 2:08 PM
PS... so this is the Ellip for Gigno is asking for.. :) By the way, Thanks for the reply to my comment..LINDA
A   Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Rohaan, it's a fair question (in regards to your question on the bottom)... However, Never am I stuck reading the new poems. Poets around here only follow whom they choose. I, on the other hand, enjoy reading poems from all my past commenters and favorite poets. I also look up themes, such as "DREAMING" this was the first to stand out to me when searching for the theme. In which I was not disappointed. :) Hugs... LINDA
Suresh Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 6:04 AM
Good to know that I did not disappoint you. I will also read poems and try to put some good comments. Thanks for being so gentle with this novice. Hugs back. Rohaan. ((I see that people write their name...so I also wrote my name..))
A   Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 1:31 PM
Rohaan, awesome free verse ... Love can be dreamy.... Linda
Suresh Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 12:33 AM
to be modest I tried my hand at writing an ellip..But it turned out something else..I guess....thanks anyways!
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