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My dream was to be a Jane Austen - or a Virginia Woolfe, whose novel, "Mrs. Dalloway" rocked the world, or Kadambari - the muse who inspired the Bard in Bengali Literature. a few fearless women - Debjani, and Gandhari, and Draupadi, from Indian classics, but before anyone else, I want to be the woman who appears in my dream! never went to school, she was not allowed, picked up any paper when sweeping the floor, and read - she was warned - women became widows if they read, she was unstoppable! she had ten kids - two still-births, she cooked for thirty people each day, ate her meals after she fed everyone, she hand-knitted blankets, to keep children warm, prayed every day for well-being of her family, and for the universe. my grandmother, and many women of the world of yesteryear, started a revolution, carried the torch, without realizing the legacy they left for us, the burden they lifted! The love of learning, the spiritualism, the kindness - we imbibed as blessings... did they see us - the women of today in the horizon? the modern, liberated, emancipated women, we are today, we attend school and choose our path, we decide to marry or not, who to marry, we raise our children with confidence. we don't ask for money, we earn money, we lead, we invent, we do miracles. sorry Jane Austen, I would rather be my Grandma's granddaughter, before anyone else! March 8, 2022

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Date: 3/9/2022 9:10:00 PM
How many women still live like this , even those that are in the U.S., that their families keep them shackled to still hide or be killed.. To see a man standing around hold the child while his wife does all the lifting and hard work. The man should be a shamed. We see. But what do we do, it's their culture.
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Date: 3/13/2022 5:58:00 PM
Dear Eve, this poem is about the women in my grandmother's time - early twentieth century! History is interesting, not many women I know now, live like this! But again, there are women who do. We have come a long way - my grandmother loved reading, but didn't have a chance to go to school, not because they were very poor, society did not allow women to have formal education. Not all men supported the system, actually many men encouraged women-education. The status of women in my generation and after, has drastically changed. But I often dream about those women who paved our way through many sufferings and hardships. I am so glad you read this poem of mine - my grandmother inspired me to be a writer. Love ~ Mala
Date: 3/9/2022 6:53:00 AM
A profound write for the women. Great tribute!
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Date: 3/9/2022 7:13:00 PM
Thank you, JCB. This is one of my early poems - I am very much for women empowerment.
Date: 3/8/2022 2:03:00 AM
Great poem and nice tribute to wemenhood.
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Date: 3/8/2022 5:04:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal. really appreciate your comments.

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