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Dreamers of Dreams-A 360 Double Helix Reversible

Dreamers of Dreams Incongruous realities of microcosmic minds Torturous awakenings in lives raging reminds Dormant and deceived are rapid eyes moving Absorbent are neurons firing fluidly brewing ~ Images living through altered consciousness Stages changing forever falling bottomless Distortions within space of timeless events Portions parallel admits mysterious segments ~ Death opening doors amongst dreams coming Breath filled Angels of harmonics humming Creation awaits upon celestial sailing seas Imagination of paths through eternal keys. ...in reverse Imagination of paths through eternal keys Creation awaits upon celestial sailing seas Breath filled Angels of harmonics humming Death opening doors amongst dreams coming ~ Portions parallel admits mysterious segments Distortions within space of timeless events Stages changing forever falling bottomless Images living through altered consciousness ~ Absorbent are neurons firing fluidly brewing Dormant and deceived are rapid eyes moving Torturous awakenings in lives raging reminds Incongruous realities of microcosmic minds. ...in reverse and backward Dreams of Dreamers Keys eternal through paths of imagination Seas sailing celestial upon awaits creation Humming harmonics of Angels filled breath Coming dreams amongst doors opening death ~ Segments mysterious admits parallel portions Events timeless of space within distortions Bottomless falling forever changing stages Consciousness altered through living images ~ Brewing fluidly firing neurons are absorbent Moving eyes rapid are deceived and dormant Reminds raging lives in awakenings torturous Minds microcosmic of realities incongruous. Aug.28.2018 Winged Warrior...^WW^ Not for any contest This poem is dedicated to my dear friend Silent One...in response to the recent passing of his Grandfather...and to my Mom, who passed away last Oct...may they always live in our dreams... ...I don't know if this form exists or if it's even acceptable...but is very challenging and fun...just for the heck of it...I'm calling it...a 360 Double Helix Reversible...if you have another title, please soup mail me...love & light... ^WW^

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Carole Duet

Date: 9/3/2018 1:17:00 PM

Wow! Such an unusual and interesting way to express those poetic thoughts and dreams, ^WW^. I really enjoyed reading this/all.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/30/2018 10:32:00 PM

Oh my! You have created a masterpiece!! Your thoughts hold many emotions- forward, backward and in reverse as well. Upside-down, if that is way. No matter the design, your words touch the heart. I am so sorry for your loss. Such a beautiful dedication to Silent One and his grandfather as well. Hugs, Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 8/30/2018 2:12:00 PM

What an amazing write, WW you are a master of poetry my friend. This is also a wonderful tribute to Silent One's grandfather and to your mother. I am so sorry for both of your losses - my condolences to all my good friend. Shine on...Charlie

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/30/2018 1:17:00 PM

Well done, I had to favorite this one. I'm not sure of what it is, either but, I like the imagery and flow that's presented here. An amazing read that I enjoyed.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 8/30/2018 10:17:00 AM

That's what life is all about.. stages.. harsh realities.. limited minds.. raging memories.. sailing on journeys of mystery.. death awaiting.. Great work of creative writing Winged Warrior! A FAV. You are raising high the voice of poetry and the pulse of Humanity! Long live your friendship and keep shining on the path of poetry.. be blessed always.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/30/2018 2:31:00 AM

An amazingly superb write, ^WW^, no one can beat this:)

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 8/29/2018 3:14:00 PM

hmmmm, a deep dive swim into the chapter of WW. Love this, it's amazing what can be seen on the other side of a mirror when you reverse the words. Exceptionally talented writer you are. Stellar mind.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 8/29/2018 3:19:00 PM

and much love and deepest condolences to Silent and family and to yourself WW. Such a good friend you are and such a lovely thought to the life of a much loved grandfather and to your much loved mother. They are always with you.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/29/2018 10:51:00 AM

Well it takes dexterity and courage to venture to lands unknown but as Nietzsche said " Better to write your own things that to write about things others have written! " OUTSTANDING! I would never attempt something like that for I am not that skilled!

John Hamilton

Date: 8/29/2018 10:49:00 AM

Masterful writing WW, it's a testament to a very creative mind, I marvel at your talent dear poet!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/29/2018 10:08:00 AM

Wow! And you not only created your own version of a reversible poem, you honored Silent One and your mother, who is smiling down from Heaven right now blowing you kisses and wrapping her arms around her son during his sleep.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/28/2018 2:42:00 PM

way out of the ballpark; so original and moving, WW... i send my condolences on the passing of your mother... stay well and huggs

Sand Blown

Date: 8/28/2018 1:43:00 PM

"...microcosmic minds...in space of timeless events..." it is truly amazing how much goes on in a micromind that is less than a speck of nothing in the vast universe

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/28/2018 11:24:00 AM

an impressive tour de force, ^WW^. I am sorry about your loss.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/28/2018 8:04:00 AM

This is outstanding WW! It must have been very challenging, yet you accomplished it. You are always a master at rhyming. Well done :)