Dreamer

Dreamer

ONE of my longings is that the stars above,
So bright and far they scarcely shine on love
Were not, out there, so distant from the moon
But trekked across the sky to love bestrewn.

I must not stay withdrawn but wish each day
Unto the darkness, stars would find their way
Onward through heavens submitting to the wind
And motions that one dreamer might pretend.

Never knowing that reality was lacked.
Nor that mere fantasy seems to be fact. 
No one can make these heartfelt visions clear.
Nor hope relieve the thoughts I still hold near.

Stars, bestow brightly your light to love anew.
Let us, sweetheart, together vows renew.


© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    January 12, 2010

Inspired by  Poetrysoup member contest: A Romantic Longing !! 	
Sponsored by: Laura Mckenzie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 6:02 PM
great sonnet writing, Dane Ann.Congratulations!
Guzzi Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 7:51 AM
A forward looking verse! Light & Love congrad's dear one
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 1:50 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dane Ann. Lovely poem!
Brown Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 1:52 PM
congatulations Dane Ann on a great poem and win. -Robert
Johnson Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 11:38 AM
Very nice. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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February 13, 2010 at 11:16 AM
Congrats on your winning poem in Laura's contest.. an amazing Sonnet and a well deserved victory.. see u in the spotlight my friend.. as u enjoy it... SOUP MAIL... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Muzzey Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your win with a very nice sonnet. Caryl
Fraser Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 8:00 AM
Many congratulations Dane Ann, on your win in Larua's fine contest >> James
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February 13, 2010 at 7:24 AM
Stars always seem like beacons of hope, Dane Ann. Congratulations on your success in Laura's contest! Nice work. Love, Carolyn
Dufresne Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 4:54 PM
Why did you stop? I was just getting into it! oh yeah, you weren't talking to me..sorry. .. beautiful romantic poem, Dane Ann !
George   Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 9:29 AM
Robert Frost couldn't have written one as lovely as this, Dane Ann. A Masterpiece!. Love, Lainie
Richards Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 8:23 AM
Such a lovely romantic entry to the contest, Dane Ann!! Best of luck !! Great job! Carrie
Peranteau Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 7:00 AM
Very romantic Dane ! I just love this poem ! Many more to you and yours !!!! james
Owens Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 8:15 PM
Very nice...enjoyed...Marty
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January 12, 2010 at 9:46 AM
Wonderful sonnet, Dane Ann! Beatiful flow and perfect meter! Very romantic for sure! - Tim
Pickett Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 8:58 AM
Beautiful poem DAJS..... Smooth rhythm, flowing nicely with great words......:JP]
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