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Dream world

as a character in this lucid dream
within which we are now somewhat awake
although we do dance atop love’s moonbeam
in the background we are calm like a lake 

life as already impulsed will unfold
and as a wave in the ocean we dance
but fears and desires have loosened their hold
both our mood and mode being nonchalance 

we are that stillness, the eye of a storm
observing thought forms orbiting the heart
suffused at all times in magnetism warm
sensing with each breath bliss ignition start

having seen and so known God as a fact 
within this dream we have ceased to react

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Date: 8/16/2025 7:44:00 PM
I thot maybe inspired a little bit by Edgar Allen Poe's "dream within a dream" too maybe? Great poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/16/2025 9:26:00 PM
Happy you enjoyed, Benjamin
Date: 8/16/2025 7:36:00 PM
Inspired by the Maha Upanishad
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