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Dream woman

The leaves, same as the body of a young woman, writhe when cold, when warm in color, screams of vinyl pleasure to remain unforgettable. hide shyly, under the shade of the tree I acknowledge the look gives them away, and you can't hide this love in your hands... it's the wind fault, when it stirs everything in us, even the soul and all seasons of life... Lost, can only be them, the leaves on our face, fall in rings of married trees, for over 100 years, it is the only covenant between heaven and earth...

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Date: 1/8/2024 4:33:00 PM
Ahhh every guy should have his dream girl, and vise versa. "You can't hide this love in your hands ..." Have a great week Elena
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/8/2024 4:45:00 PM
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Elena Mihalachi
Date: 1/8/2024 4:40:00 PM
Thank you Tom. Dozens of hugs <3
Date: 1/8/2024 12:23:00 PM
Your poem seamlessly blends nature with human experiences, using the metaphor of leaves to explore themes of love, time, and the cyclical nature of life. The vivid imagery and emotive language create a rich and contemplative atmosphere, inviting readers to reflect on the interconnectedness of the natural world and our shared human journey...
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Elena Mihalachi
Date: 1/8/2024 12:25:00 PM
Thank you for appreciation, is nice to feel understood <3

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