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hope improved it, seems had to rest so there could be dreams within dreams,

 

though brain cancer does not allow for the singing of poetry

 no miraculous whispers of life no light rises shinning from the sky

 yet I have read Poe’s poetry and i agree it seems 
 
 that indeed life and death are like a “ dream within a dream” 

 his words  written in pen and ink of raven’s black

 while sitting late at night as cancer of the brain attacks 

 dark and silent then bringing images and sparks 

 talks with oncologists mention a few months or few years 

 nothing can be sure with a cancer-kill radiation chemo cure 

 though early or later a vision will come with a deepening sleep 

 a headache’s cry may come with dark whimsical images seen 

 mythical life and death again are indeed “a dream within a dream” 

 possibly dark nightmarish doom might be amidst empty night

 or there might be light beams rising on the mountains of the moon

 doctors with years  experience with radiation, chemo, and dyes 

 have me lie in a lab with the tap tap tapping in a coffin like MRI 

 the talks with doctors and nurses wrap me in  warm sheets

 help me sleep while those deformed cells die -- healthy living ones as well,

 all sending signals electric currents from a faraway crystalline beach 

 like a Poe’s poem all that surrounds me  is like “a dream within a 

 dream’ unknown unseen and out of reach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/11/2019 4:21:00 PM
Beautifully done; cancer is vicious; it's bite, unwarranted and I have lost many family and friends to cancer. Wish you the best that healing can provide.
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Date: 10/28/2018 9:55:00 AM
Hugs Rick.
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