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I am aiming this at our tendancy to be dogmatic And demanding sometimes to know about a Moot-point in order to discredit the larger story Or record of events..As precisce or vauge as it may Be.Thank you for reading.'

Whats your vision? Like..An idea of the ultimate right? How can wrong be converted? History.?? Tell it to me In sharp definition; much clarity! be precise what exact Ammount of buttons were on George Washingtons coat Or jacket and what makeup were they.? At Yorktown the Seminal day.' Am I right in denying the existance of the Broader scenes if you cant furnish this one instance.? Did pilate wear sandals? More than likely.' Does that bear On Christs trial.? More than the (pilate stone?) Here I shall just put; Crickey.!!

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Valsa George

Date: 11/4/2024 8:18:00 PM

Hi Joe, you have thrown before us a jumble of thoughts.... ! They are worth brooding especially to where our world is moving and where lies real truth.

Joe Maverick
Date: 11/5/2024 11:06:00 AM

In reality Valsa no one is ever Going to be able to fully reflect every detail of an historical event.' I know I had a Birthday 15 yrs ago i cant remember what taxi firm took me?? B t w..Was it the bigger.? You know..' Oh yes a bus.' It might have been a bus.? And What underpants did I wear.? I mean if i cant fully recall? Am I real?.Well I beleive so?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/26/2024 2:20:00 PM

current day events are seen and interpreted in such contrasting ways as to make me wonder if anything we learn from history was actually true or false. Only God knows

Joe Maverick
Date: 10/27/2024 12:32:00 AM

Hmm..It focuses me at least On (what is important??) As We can only be really involved in our close proximity.) So its better to live Better there ( so say 10 million people doing this ) would seep out everywhere leading to a more theraputic world..Which in everyday life Was here from the 1920's to The end of the 1960's ? I beleive a lot of this was down to street preaching ( and by those small groups ) or one man set ups..Not the big rallys so much.?

Crystol Woods

Date: 10/26/2024 9:38:00 AM

Interesting... thought provoking! Xo

Joe Maverick
Date: 10/26/2024 10:14:00 AM

Well g'day lady..Good ta see Ya.' As well as ta read ya.'

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/26/2024 4:22:00 AM

Yes, nothing we see is as it really is...as Christ saw, and saw us, His brothers and sisters. Love is truth...Love is all that should matter...but there are two kinds of passion, both good and evil. Love not vanity...for it is evil. You always get me deep thinking, Joe.

Joe Maverick
Date: 10/26/2024 9:25:00 AM

Hello Joe Dimino..As always you post a thoughtful comment, I trust you are well At this present time.'

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/20/2024 2:41:00 PM

We might be interested in the nuances but what made the person, and not their sins (we all have them), but what golden nugget did they hold up to the sun, what silk was spun, what pattern begun? Yes we can twist a web anyway we want, but truth wants to be shown…the simple truth…freedom.

Joe Maverick
Date: 10/20/2024 10:10:00 PM

Thank you for commenting Kim..Yet i find people obstufucate with details or Lack of them..Yet we are all Ourselves imperfect if we search the details of our Own life.? We can get bogged in there.' We need the newness of Jesus who Embraced death and mans 'Idea of justice?' To give us A chance..While we yet exist in the flesh.!