Dream Destiny's Path

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(Dare to dream, then achieve; visions evolve as talents grow.) By Poet.
Grace's ashes are bare, graves made, last chaos has wiped out our shade, and, bleakness is a word guide strain. Train ripples haunt a forlorn brain. Veiled yet weird by what may impair, dreams of mayhem and what will bear. Shielding truth by false and self-shame, irate parts were thrown through in maim. Blood-stained eyeballs burst from their loom, hearts turn purple after their gloom. Signs of ruin are sketched closer, Few minutes in cosmos amber. I dream to change the way to doom, eons are snubbed as it, ne'er boom. Yonks bygone, time came to a halt. Angel of the shade guards the gault.
1st PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: March 29, 2022 Checked by HMS.COM Theme: 3. Dream Form L - Lay - New Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 4/8/2022 1:22:00 PM
Sotto, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful poem, I love your image and quote also ~Constance
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Date: 4/8/2022 10:42:00 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your win with this poem of powerful words and images leaving an impact in the spirit. It is poetically dark yet ends with the line "I dream to change the way to doom." So well written my friend. Sending you blessings.
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Date: 4/5/2022 4:37:00 AM
I have quickly read your winning entry in Constance's contest and found it worthy of its honor. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 4/4/2022 6:14:00 AM
"last chaos has wiped out our shade" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/30/2022 1:24:00 PM
Indeed... in dreams we are free... Your dreams of mayhem curtain my room... Forcing me to sleep in this quiet gloom.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/1/2022 11:33:00 PM
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Sotto Poet
Date: 3/30/2022 6:17:00 PM
Thank you so much for your insightful comment, Pashang. It means a lot to me.
Date: 3/30/2022 6:00:00 AM
I like your quote as much as your poem. Well done my friend. Sending winning wishes your way.
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Date: 3/30/2022 1:25:00 AM
Splendid poem. We dream but be must work hard to achieve.
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Date: 3/29/2022 10:08:00 PM
"I dream to change the way to doom"..... In a weary world, even dreams turn into nightmares ! In a bleak life what we can do most is to dream to change the way to doom. Very powerful write dear friend !
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Date: 3/29/2022 8:42:00 PM
Many of us have dreams that were never realized because of the fear of trying and failing or because someone else held them back from achieving something that was important to them. Those who don't dream never achieve anything. Follow your dreams. Be all you can be. A fine write my friend. Your poems make the reader think. Nice job. God Bless, JB
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