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Dream Catchers

There was a time when feathers found me like talismans, they came.
Without their down, I was grounded, the sparrow thought to lend me flight.   
Now, neither up, nor down do my eyes go, for the third eye is my frame.

Flight takes a lonely path, stirred by each wanton wayward breeze.
The sky above is not for me, the spiral path of mystery, my hook, my lure.
Ah, not to choose but taste of both would, I dream, be heaven for me.

Now, within my window’s pane I’ve hung a catcher of dreams
I’ve found a way to fly inward and rise upon the fragile breeze of mind.
Feather’s hang among the circle’s weave, they are the tokens I keep.



Sijo String
First Published in Dual Coast Magazine Issue 1 2014
Artist Carol Cavalaris
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Anderson Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 8:27 PM
Debbie, I so enjoyed DREAM CATCHER. Your line " I've found a way to fly inward....", touched me deeply. Thank you.Blessings. Rev. Elizabeth.
Wesley Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 5:52 PM
You never disappoint Debbie, a lov ely rendition of fantasy my dear. Love Lizzy
Guzzi Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 7:58 AM
ah but it is my reality ;)
Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 4:47 AM
Reads that some thoughtful work that you have penned..Do dream catchers work at catching bad, scary dreams so that they don't appear?..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Horne Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 8:16 AM
lovely sijo, Debs. Had a go at writing it for your contest - please let me know after the contest where I went wrong, or how to improve xx
Chircop Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 2:15 AM
Can I share your catcher of dreams Dear ma,so all the bad and evil never find my heart and beauty is all that remains.I really love this poem and adding it to my favourites !!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 5:35 PM
I just saw your reply about not having the rules down yet. It really is hard to know exactly, isn't it? I tried to find examples online, there are not all that many for strings and we are just seeing other people like ourselves trying it out.
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 5:34 PM
sure would be nice to see DEB's DAD on here!!! TEll him I said so!
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 9:13 AM
wow, Debs, this is indeed a sijo string. Wish I could do one as good as this one!! I can see how it got published. well done, and congratulations.
Guzzi Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Thanks Andie I still don't think I have the rules quite down yet
Devonshire Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Dear Deb, This is truly a beautiful, imaginative write. From the first line to the last, you have taken us on a "flight" that is so pleasurable. I have a dream catcher too, dear, but some of my dreams I'd prefer to see escape. Yours are wonderful! Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 4:52 PM
It's suppose to keep us from dreaming the bad ones, catch them and only let the good one through!
Anish Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 1:42 PM
I have a Native American dreamcatcher in my place. Are you partly Native American? I really enjoyed this poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dunn Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 8:49 PM
This work has tugged at the small part of my soul's heart being part native American great job dear lady. I love how you talk about aging and still having the imagination and thought process to come up with a wonderment to make others ponder beyond years of experience into poet miracles love this my friend take care cheri
Lamoureux Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 8:00 AM
I love the symbolism of a dream catcher and I love how you have weaved your story around one.
Ryerson Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 2:30 AM
Si-jo you been doin cher? (Man THAT was corny!) This is SO elegant and lyrical and I am very intimidated by this form and I demand that you fly town ASAP for personal instruction. I'll pick you up at the airport...
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June 10, 2014 at 11:58 AM
Debbie!!!!! SO pretty!!! So...deep and thought provoking....I love how you came you wove the thoughts together..the strings coming full circle to that beautiful dream catcher that remains. Oh...I'm really touched by this. I have a dream catcher in my office. Lovely work....You ROCK, my dear.
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June 10, 2014 at 11:26 AM
Hi Debbie, thanks for sharing this gem. I have a dream catcher that I am looking at a little differently now! Well done. Kindest regards.
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