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My poem Dream Analysis With A Friend was published in the Autumn 2018 edition of Popshot Magazine. The editors told me it made them laugh at the office.

 

Me And so there I was in a house, but it wasn't a house it was a shop, but not any old shop it was my house and I ran but I didn't run like me I ran like a dog but I wasn't a dog I was me but I ran on all fours but as I ran I clawed at the path grabbing great pleats of path and tried to drag it under me but what was in front of me stayed there and wouldn't end up behind me and so I ran but didn't run through my house that was a shop with a path inside but I was outside my house that wasn't my house gaining no ground at all. Friend (Looking up from his phone) Weird. I don't remember mine. Same again? My round.

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Date: 9/29/2024 3:53:00 AM
Lovely, my daughter was telling me a similar tale this morning and I was trying my best to ooh in the right places hehe. Well encapsulated to perfection - congrats on your published kudos too :)
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 9/29/2024 4:01:00 AM
Funny when someone tells you their dream you couldn't give a monkey's about, yes ooh in the right places haha

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