Dream

 
I inhale the crisp air, It smells of the rich earth; The scents of the forest, Sweet, and piercing my senses. There is a happiness and joy, A beauty and tranquility; Trees give way to fields of green, And wildflowers grow in every hue. There is a twitter of a bird, A squirrel foraging in the grass; It all blends seamlessly within my dream, In happy sweet harmony. I hear the sound of rushing water, A waterfall cascading over a jagged cliff; Where below silver fish swim, And I cup the water to my lips. Oh, what a delightfully happy dream. __________________ August 30, 2015 Verse For the contest, Get Happy 101, sponsor, Casarah Nance Fourth Place
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Haight Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 3:50 PM
A lovely dream, Broken, and you've painted it so beautifully with your words. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Merryman Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 9:19 PM
I like your dream, Constance! Sounds like one I'd like to have. Congrats on your win! Love, KIm
A  Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 1:19 PM
awesome win
A. Sharma Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 4:12 AM
Superb take with this very happy write n a great win Broken! Big congrats!
Ebbs Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 8:22 AM
Coming back to say congrats, congrats :)
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 4:30 AM
what a lovely dream congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Tor Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 12:51 AM
Congratulations Broken Wings. Beautiful write. What a dream.
Y. Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 11:23 PM
BW, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
Nance Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 8:35 PM
So calming and happy I love it! Grats on your win!
Muideen Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Wow!!!! You painted this with vivid imagery... A wonderful and sweet dream...excellence.........A.M.
Inman Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 3:21 PM
Beautiful dream BW.
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 9:33 AM
Wonderful work with great thought given to the subject mater as it is gently unfolded for the readers delight giving it a dream like quality. Emile.
Boddie Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 7:23 PM
the imagery in this dream....is some of the greatest ever seen....it pierces the heart touching the Soul....with too much warmth to ever turn cold....;)
Ryerson Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 4:42 PM
Soup Mail...
Clark Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 4:17 PM
Gorgeous poem Broken Wings absolutely Gorgeous!!! Love sister Susan!
Onclaud Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 2:19 PM
your sense of joy shines through this resplendent write, constance... ever lovely.. huggs.. soupie for you!
Parker Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 12:02 PM
You captured all the senses in this delightful poem..a truly happy dream
Manassian Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 12:59 AM
Nature speaks to us, BM, in a language that soothes and calms. It times it is tempestuous as well, but....there is much beauty in nature. Lovely dream of a poem, dear. Hugs
Ebbs Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 11:15 PM
Yeah, Awesome dream, congrats!!!
Walter Skyy Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 9:52 PM
That was Beautifully written!!! I hope you will stop pass some times. I think you might enjoy "Moon Light". I hope to see you there. Have a good night!!!
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