Dread

The song that feigns to be a slave in deed
To mourn the life that ousts the face of peace
That sad bells peal with tears of those who grieve
And bow their heads to those who fear to cease

To choose the weight of ton and gloom of ache
To lay in watch to mark the clock rush slow
The pang of rail, the strike of steel to take
With one foot in the pit of grave song's woe

The sun has but to trade the dark to light
But lost and fixed its loft clings far too high
As cold and cloud has barred its melt from sight
To hold this heart with bleak sad chill to cry

Bound and caged it pens its last sad good bye
To spare this soul of dread to spurn or die!

September 29, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hamilton Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 5:35 PM
This is a great sonnet Lonna congrats on another win!
Blodgett Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 7:44 PM
Thank you for the opportunity and kind words. Lonna
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 7:01 AM
This is so good, congratson your win.;0)
Blodgett Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:56 PM
Thanks friend. Your words are always a welcome. Lonna
Agustin Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 12:48 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
Blodgett Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:55 PM
Thanks Beata. You are kind Lonna
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 6:15 PM
I am glad that I was afforded the time to reread your exceptionally well-worded masterpiece, prior to placing, resulting in a higher placement with my extended courtesies to 3rd Place ~ Aloha always William
Blodgett Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:55 PM
Thank you so much William. Great contest in which my muse worked very hard. Lonna
Parker Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 8:17 PM
glad to see you entered this contest, an outstanding entry dear poet...good luck
Blodgett Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:53 PM
Thanks again Frederic! Lonna
May Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 7:24 PM
Very well crafted Lonna, GL in the Contest..
Blodgett Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:52 PM
Thank you Joseph. Appreciate your thoughts. Lonna
Squyres Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 4:26 PM
Wow !! What a summation in those last two lines. I've read it 4 times and find each line written in a strong voice. "To reach this heart of bleak and chill that cries"... imploring to the heart and mind. Love this !!!
Blodgett Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 10:05 AM
Thanks so much Debra. I am so glad you enjoyed it. If you have a moment I have edited it again. Lonna
Krutsinger Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 4:25 PM
This was a difficult challenge. You have written a wonderful poem in response to a difficult prompt!
Blodgett Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Thank you Caren! I have since edited to create some clarity. See what you think. Lonna
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