Drama At Daylight

A weathered watchman witnesses 
possible perils passing through the skies
at the dawn of daylight. 
His eagle eyes are alert and attentive 
ever attracted to the unfolding horizon 
that hovers over his head.


He glimpses an aggrevated glare
a red raged, colored temper tantrum 
a telltale sign of trouble approaching
from afar. 

Soon the sinking sunlight succumbs 
to sinister swaths of bold, blackened clouds 
as pellets of rain begin to pound downward.

Heaven’s guard hurls down a litany of lightening
crackling upon the earth’s crust, causing
the thirsty terrain to tremble in anticipation.

As the skies unfurl like a didactic drama 
driving its point home purposefully 
a sudden shift of shadows allows
the sun to once again regain its
glory in the skies. 

As the freshly scented dew descends
upon the land, a radiant rainbow rises 
like a multicolored river in the air
and the weathered watchman smiles. 




Written on 3/23/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:42 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
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May 19, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thank you, Eve. :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 3:57 PM
Awesome rhythm and imagery, Laura. Congrats on your win.
Leiser Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thank you, Line. :)
George   Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 7:52 AM
Great story telling, Laura. Many congrats on your fine win. Elaine
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April 3, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Thank you, Elaine :)
S     Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:13 PM
This really is great dramatic story telling! Loved your take on the contest Laura and your use of alliteration is superb! Congrats on your win!! Best, Judy
Leiser Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Thank you, Judith :)
Ashley Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Such beautiful drama, imagery and alliteration in your fantastic poem Laura. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes..
Leiser Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Thank you, Susan! I'm so glad you liked this one :)
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 3:20 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 2:58 PM
Dramatic storytelling Laura and great use of alliteration.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Leiser Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 2:17 PM
Thank you so much for my placement in your contest, Silent! I love to do alliteration :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 9:01 AM
Oh I love the imagination of a rainbow like a multicolored river! Nicely done!
Leiser Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 2:18 PM
Thanks so much, Kim! Glad you liked this one :)
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 4:11 PM
- Fantastic, Laura !!! - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 2:18 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :)
Evans Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 10:58 PM
This poem is what happens when a writer smashes the mirror we all hold up to our world and then puts it back together in a unique way. Lovely.
Leiser Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 11:55 PM
Thank you for your high complement, Richard! Glad you enjoyed this poem :)
Green Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 9:02 PM
This was fantastic. Really nicely done.
Leiser Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 11:56 PM
Thank you, Chis! Glad you liked this one :)
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