Dragonfly

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on reconnaissance missions
efficient feisty warrior
in stealth mode
hovers steady
deliberate
she glides
intent



AP: 1st place 2021

Posted on May 15, 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/25/2020 12:35:00 AM
You described them perfectly! Thank you for sharing. ~ Elaine
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Date: 5/25/2020 4:25:00 AM
Thanks, Elaine. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/24/2020 5:38:00 AM
The first line grabbed me and made me smile and I smiled all the way through until I realized I have seen no dragonflies this year. Perhaps they come in June? July? Now I am questioning my garden, wanting them now.
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Date: 5/25/2020 4:25:00 AM
Absolutely ~ I particularly love damselflies.
Date: 5/15/2020 1:44:00 PM
You've captured the one insect that's always frightened me... Soup mail, please. :) Gershon
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Date: 5/24/2020 10:46:00 AM
You would have freaked out the day we drove through a bog, I could not figure out what the cloud was and the driver refused to roll up the windows. It was from the famous scene from Shakespeare with the witches... It took me forever to figure out they were actually dragonflies ~ talk about a prehistoric version of Twilight Zone.
Date: 5/15/2020 3:39:00 AM
perfect personification and I love the picture, I love watching them in action - got to fave this little gem!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/15/2020 1:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/14/2020 11:55:00 PM
I like this, Line - the dragonfly as a warrior on reconnaissance. So innovative. I do love dragonflies.
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Date: 5/15/2020 12:19:00 AM
Thanks, Sam. They truly are drone-like. It's unbelievable how many varieties there are.
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