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Dragonfly

on reconnaissance missions
efficient feisty warrior
in stealth mode
hovers steady
deliberate
she glides
intent



AP: 1st place 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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George   Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 12:35 AM
You described them perfectly! Thank you for sharing. ~ Elaine
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 4:25 AM
Thanks, Elaine. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 5:38 AM
The first line grabbed me and made me smile and I smiled all the way through until I realized I have seen no dragonflies this year. Perhaps they come in June? July? Now I am questioning my garden, wanting them now.
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 4:25 AM
Absolutely ~ I particularly love damselflies.
Wolf Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 1:44 PM
You've captured the one insect that's always frightened me... Soup mail, please. :) Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 10:46 AM
You would have freaked out the day we drove through a bog, I could not figure out what the cloud was and the driver refused to roll up the windows. It was from the famous scene from Shakespeare with the witches... It took me forever to figure out they were actually dragonflies ~ talk about a prehistoric version of Twilight Zone.
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 3:39 AM
perfect personification and I love the picture, I love watching them in action - got to fave this little gem!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 1:19 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Most appreciated.
Kauffman Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 11:55 PM
I like this, Line - the dragonfly as a warrior on reconnaissance. So innovative. I do love dragonflies.
Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 12:19 AM
Thanks, Sam. They truly are drone-like. It's unbelievable how many varieties there are.
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