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Dragged To Hell

I am exhausted
All these faces haunt my soul
No sleep comes to me
When I killed them they all cried
Now they watch me with those grins
I know I'll be dragged to hell


For Freddie's Tanka Contest
Let me see if you can guess I wrote this one.

Copyright © Richard Lamoureux | Year Posted 2013

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Isaiah Zerbst Date: 4/20/2013 6:25:00 PM Sorry I am late in offering my congratulations. You also won second place as a wool-puller, (see the blog). Good job on both your wins. This new style is quite different. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/20/2013 6:44:00 PM Thanks Isaiah I will check out the blog.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 4/20/2013 10:57:00 AM Lovely write Richcrown (my word)... Congrats on your beautiful win~A.O Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/20/2013 6:45:00 PM I like your word. Thanks A.O

Donna Jones Date: 4/20/2013 8:10:00 AM Where did this come from Richard?...deep!!!!!!! Amazing!!!!!!! Congratulations......Donna Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/20/2013 8:22:00 AM Not really sure Lol, maybe to many episodes of criminal minds or perhaps reading Stephen King Novels.

Rachel Kovacs Date: 4/20/2013 6:59:00 AM Creepy! As a crime fiction author, I love it. I like that you took a different point of view and got inside a killer's head. It reminds me of Poe. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/20/2013 8:07:00 AM Thanks Rachel

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/19/2013 6:25:00 PM Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/19/2013 6:41:00 PM Thanks Debbie.

Richard D Seal Date: 4/19/2013 5:24:00 PM Rather disturbing Riiiccchhhaarrddd lol but also rather good and better they are haunting him, well done and congratulations. Take care, Richard Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/19/2013 5:26:00 PM Thanks Richard

Carrie Richards Date: 4/19/2013 1:49:00 PM Wow..........you really changed your style.....I would not have guessed this to be yours!! You wowed us all !! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/19/2013 2:01:00 PM Thanks Carrie

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/19/2013 10:17:00 AM congratulations.... Linda Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 4/15/2013 2:08:00 AM Yikes! This was something I didn't expect from you... don't stay up too late watching horror films would be my advice! Grudge kept me awake at nights for at least two weeks. This could also be about a post-war veteran, coming back with all the awful memories of battle... you put me in the moment. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/15/2013 6:51:00 AM Thanks Timothy

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 4/10/2013 12:38:00 PM I would not have guessed you wrote this Rick....well done! Soupmail Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/10/2013 7:51:00 PM Thanks Cecilia

James Fraser Date: 4/5/2013 5:21:00 PM Our deep, it's stark, our abyss, dark. It's our awakening that answers. Love it Richard, I so love Dark writes. Have a koolio weekend, James <> also says a massive thank you, especially for Colleen xx Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/9/2013 6:45:00 AM Thanks

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/31/2013 4:40:00 PM Reading the comments, I see why you did one like this. I think you will fool him, Richard. Way to go! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/1/2013 7:17:00 AM Thanks

Carrie Richards Date: 3/31/2013 1:55:00 PM This is a sure masquarade if you are going for a poem that does not reflect your usual style...great job!! (I see that it is for the contest to go into a different type of poem than the usual!) This will do it! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/1/2013 7:18:00 AM Thanks Carrie

Eileen Manassian Date: 3/31/2013 1:22:00 PM WOW....me no like, Richard. Me no like! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 3/31/2013 1:39:00 PM As long as you know....this isn't who you are...SURE...all that what lurks within stuff was pretty intense, but...it is good to explore! I just wanted to tease. Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/31/2013 1:35:00 PM Sopposed to do a poem unrecognizable from my normal persona so I guess mission accomplished. Eileen Manassian Date: 3/31/2013 1:23:00 PM Was that too candid. I'm sorry. I don't picture you as a killer....rather a healer.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/31/2013 1:10:00 PM Don't worry I have not moved to the dark side, this is for Isaiah's contest. I had to write in a new form and different than my regular way of expressing myself. Login to Reply