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Draft Not Sure How I Feel About the Rain

"A storm rolled in, overwhelmed me sometime late this morning... Think I ignored the warnings" Quote from song: Seeing You, Tim Minchin Feel the rain on my skin, empty feeling Try to forget heartache I'm concealing Tough not to feel alone when it's encased within Empty feeling, feel the rain on my skin A storm overwhelmed me, late this morning Though I ignored the warning All wrapped up in things that might be Late this morning, a storm overwhelmed me I dance in the rain, when myself I forget Experience highs and lows just like Juliet Peace is possible to obtain When myself I forget, I dance in the rain Feel the rain on my skin, revive my senses Focus on love and the torment ceases Let the past go, don't lock within Revive my senses, feel the rain on my skin

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Date: 7/24/2023 2:13:00 AM
Direct quote ,I just can't get over it .
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Date: 7/24/2023 2:15:00 AM
My mind has jumped to Going on a Bear Hunt lines Vickey - "can't go over it, can't go under it, you'll have go through it!" Still applicable :)

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