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Down Where the Forsythia Blooms

Down the road where the Forsythia bloomed Bright yellow despite dark clouds amassed Flooding rains, thunder, lightening flashed Touched with sadness for home removed Spirits of hardy souls still live Floating shrouds mixed with the rain Hear their voices in the howling wind Feel their presence in Bamboo Chimes again On days like today with gray_flooding Winds that chill_sleep elusive One bright spot offers assurance_comfort Knowing that in our going memories will linger For at least one generation children will see Our lives lived down where the Forsythia blooms (I know that the rhyming and syllable count is off)

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Date: 3/10/2011 1:48:00 PM
Enjoyed this write Sara! Thanks for your comment on my Diminished Hexsaverse:) Carol
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:24:00 AM
No matter bout the rhyme and syllable count Sara ..the beauty and sensitivity of this poem is enchanting ... elegant words create a lovely visual image of the stunning blooms and deeper meanings... enjoyed wsith lluv..
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:24:00 AM
Beautifully penned, Sara. The forsythias used to be a sign of spring in NJ. Sometimes when a house is destroyed by lightning the flowers surrounding it remain untouched. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:14:00 AM
Hi Sara Lovely and to answer your question yes I am on facebook. Dont realy know how it works but yes
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:07:00 AM
Hey, no matter what count is off, this was damn impressive.
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