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Down This Road

on a snow covered slope for what seems like miles the serpentine lines lead back to you when the sand, surf, and sun join hands with the blue horizon you watch in naked awe still down this road I need to know your plans your simple goodbyes

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Valerie Staton

Date: 1/31/2018 3:17:00 PM

Very nicely composed. You said a lot with very little words. Love the use of "serpentine miles"

Ricky Muse
Date: 2/3/2018 12:57:00 AM

Thanks Val. Some nice things have been said about this poem. I hope I can do more. Thanks again..................peace!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/22/2017 12:29:00 PM

So how did the plan turn out? Have a nice day my friend.

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/19/2017 1:15:00 PM

Stopped to read again. Love can be blue in fact eventually it all ends up that shade. But it can be rollicking fun too.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/19/2017 11:28:00 PM

That is where mine comes from and has never let me down yet.

Ricky Muse
Date: 9/19/2017 7:09:00 PM

A former muse asked me, "do you have time for love" and that question led to this poem. Ninety percent of what I write is like that. Straight from the heart. Stop bye anytime Pat......................peace!

Silent One

Date: 9/18/2017 7:03:00 AM

A deep, well written piece.. which seems like a personal poem..

Ricky Muse
Date: 9/19/2017 4:41:00 AM

You are right my friend this one is very personal. Poetry for me is always a deeper look inside. Thanks for your input.................peace!

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/17/2017 3:30:00 PM

Bit of melancholy mind in this piece. He is unsure of what s next.

Ricky Muse
Date: 9/17/2017 4:14:00 PM

When I was writing song lyrics love was perfect, but when I started writing poems love became sad and blue. Go figure. Thanks for stopping by..........................peace!