Down the Woods

"Nature never did betray the heart that loved her". 
William Wordsworth

Down the woods I stride my way
Deep on its portaI I see
myriads of daffodils blooming 
in varied colours and shape;
Trumpets in golden hue
and pink jonquillas that radiate
in the dappled sunlight.

All of a sudden,  it drizzles 
and a rainbow descends
and kisses each dainty petal;
I wish to have even a single stalk
So I could bring to grandma's tomb;
But before I could find my way back home 
I see white daffodils dancing 
encircling my ancestors' graveyard.


15 March 2022

"A Brian Strand 1090" Poetry Contest
1st place
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Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 9:52 AM
wow, what a lovely picture you created here. So nice to finally see this golden oldie
George Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 9:33 PM
Yes, Nature never betrays those who love her. An apt quote for this wonderful poem . I can sense your love for Nature in all you do and write, Jez!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 12:34 AM
I really love this part "But before I could find my way back home I see white daffodils dancing encircling my ancestors' graveyard."
Alex Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 11:31 PM
So lively narration. Vivid illustration. Congratulations!
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