Doubt

unsure nagging thoughts flood anxious "what if"s" drown hopes foundations of the mind falter waver Written on 5/25/2017

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/4/2017 9:42:00 AM

Doubts can drag us down with them, Laura. What we need are some reassuring words and positive thoughts! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2017 7:53:00 PM

Nicely done, Laura. I like how the first and last words match each other so well. Very concisely expressed.

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/3/2017 9:50:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/25/2017 4:10:00 PM

I think we can all relate to these feelings Laura, what if's and if only do make us doubt our decisions but we cannot change what is in the past:-) great poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/25/2017 9:35:00 PM

Thank you, Jan :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/25/2017 3:09:00 PM

Very good! GL!

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/25/2017 3:14:00 PM

Thanks, Kim :)