Richard Lamoureux Poet Questionku

Double Valentine Haiku Plus One Questionku

chilled bottle of wine
stockings hung over her chair
candle lights the way

naked on his bed
she pretends to be asleep
a valentine treat

he comes to her
a single red rose
will she be satisfied?


For Linda's Contest

haiku 575

questionku 456 ending with a question.

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Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2015 at 6:27 PM hmmm, let's hope they are both satisfied!! I was satisfied reading this treat. Congrats on your great win.

Paul Callus March 22, 2015 at 3:36 PM Pleased to be back with deserved congratulations, Richard! Well done. // paul

Poet Destroyer A March 22, 2015 at 1:43 PM RICAHRD, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA

Monterey Sirak February 9, 2015 at 8:58 AM You set the scene for romance and filled the air with a sense of hesitancy. Simply stunning! Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2015 at 5:46 PM That's what I was going for, I'm glad it came across!

Constance La France February 8, 2015 at 2:04 PM Richard, another sexy write, I love it for that, so romantic and intense, well done and best of luck in the contest, and thanks for the visit ~~ Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2015 at 5:46 PM Thanks for the visit and luck.

Harry Horsman February 8, 2015 at 4:37 AM reading this Richard, i think any girl would be... Richard Lamoureux February 8, 2015 at 9:30 AM ;0) thanks Harry!

Justin Bordner February 8, 2015 at 1:46 AM A woman won't ignore a man whose passion has known none other like her before. Wonderful poem of love play Richard. J.A.B. Richard Lamoureux February 8, 2015 at 9:29 AM Thanks Justin.

Eileen Manassian February 7, 2015 at 2:53 PM It's been a very busy day, Richard. Church, lunch with family, rest, and then outing with friends and family...just got home. Read this on my phone, but wanted to be calm so I could post. Stunning imagery. Satisfaction comes when you know you are loved despite....everything. Lovely...wishing you the best in the contest. Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 4:08 PM Thanks Eileen, I had a bit of fun writing this one. I hadn't written a questionku in a long time so I was pleased to see Linda incorporate the form into her latest contest.

Verlena S. Walker February 7, 2015 at 2:26 PM Very nice Richard. I have enjoyed reading this poem... Verlena Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 2:27 PM Thanks Verlena. ;0) Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 2:26 PM So nice to have you back Michael, I had been a bit concerned. Thanks for the thoughtful visit.

Demetrios Trifiatis February 7, 2015 at 10:07 AM A perfect atmosphere for a valentine day! Oh , yes, she will be when love in the heart, dear Richard! Very romantic and eloquent! Good luck plus a seven! Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 2:28 PM Wow, thanks again for another 7! Have awonderful weekend my friend.

Liam Mcdaid February 7, 2015 at 6:41 AM beautifully crafted richard love how you drew this piece pal Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 7:50 AM Thankyou my friend!

Tim Smith February 7, 2015 at 6:19 AM I'm sure you won't disappoint. Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 7:49 AM I hope not *lol*,

Paul Callus February 7, 2015 at 5:06 AM The atmosphere is all set..the treat is on offer; the rose?....lovely for starters:) ...the rest...the night is long! // paul Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 7:47 AM I can think of no better way to spend Valentines!

Mark J. Halliday February 7, 2015 at 12:33 AM Nicely done. Good imagery. Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 7:46 AM Thanks Nark, I appreciate the visit.

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2015 at 11:06 PM oh man, everyone is putting up their haiku for this one. I HAVE to get going. yours is one of the best I have seen, Richard!!! Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 7:42 AM You are kind, thanks Andrea.

Casarah Nance February 6, 2015 at 8:03 PM Oh YES! Nicely done! :) Richard Lamoureux February 6, 2015 at 8:27 PM Thanks Casarah. Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison February 6, 2015 at 6:57 PM ooh errr Richard - lovely sensual write - good luck in the contest and may your Valentines dream come true:-) hugs jan xxx 7 xxx Richard Lamoureux February 6, 2015 at 6:58 PM ha ha, I expect they will!