- Dot - Dot - Dot -

love the simplicity of this. Seems like I have'nt conversed with you for a while. Is that just me ? ;} xxx's

I loved this! How wonderful! Yes...a pause! I use this often! :) Hugs

A breath of life you've penned! Well done AL Anderson. AO

Your style is rapid and effective. I admire synthetic poetry which allows to breathe......

Very ineresting and great creativity... I take a sigh of relief.

Anne so true about punctuation. Without any no sense can be made. A cleaver Senyru. Have a great evening. Warm Smiles, Connie

Ah...something I do too often..pausing to think.

A breath of fresh air, Anne-Lise! Love it. Yes :)

Good message. Nicely written Anne :) Always, Laura

Yes, sometimes in reading poetry one needs to slow down to absorb what the writer had to say..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Interesting and inventive... Great! Terry

I love using dots... LOL... Bet you've noticed... This tickled my fancy...

I love your senryu my dear friend Anne Lise. A brilliant idea on how you give importance to punctuation in life through your excellent poem. Thank you so much for sharing and your very inspiring and wonderful comment on my poems last night. Belated happy Mother's Day. God bless you and your family always! love lots, Leonora

Very inventive! I liked the way you make the punctuation "come to life". I recall watching an audiotape that was literally all about the history of punctuation, but told in a comical way. These little observations are always fun...

clink clunk permeates the night, is me heart a pounding right, teeth are gripping with me bite, shut up johnson say goodnight...:)

What you have here is something which gives me a smile and an opportunity for a very deep breath. Thank-you for your last comment, by the way. It made me feel appreciated. I am here in Eastern Daylight Time, far away from you. However, I feel thankful for your lovely poetry. The world is wonderfully remarkable in that we can use these tools to share wonderful thoughts! Thanks.

I breathe with you.... lovely thought !!

Thanks God, it's a breath of Dot ...Dot...Dot. .......Excellent style of Senryu. Thanks......., loved always, b

Love this... what a breath of fresh air :) xx

Good one... You made me smile too. Sometimes simplicity is best... Jack

Was intrigued with the title... You made me smile . BG

Pauses are like resting places, to allow us to gather strength on the exploration of poetry's mysteries. Well said, Anne-Lise... David

ohhh, those pauses mark a sigh, a change, a final end to a refrain... beautiful way to make the air drift in and out of our life source, anne... BREATHLESS! ...hope mother's day went well.. :) huggs!

so clever Anne Lise, in fact very clever,would also make a wonderful senryu....or haiku...

we all should ....... excellent insight dear, Anne Lise.