Dorothy

Somewhere on the ocean waves in the year of sixty six
The ocean wind and rain joined forces, a deadly dangerous mix
We were on our way from the Mediterranean, where we were deployed
Amphibious operations and some ports that we enjoyed

It was mid July, the sea was calm on a warm and sunny morning
We were heading into inclement weather, a violent hurricane warning
Later that day the seas picked up much higher than the norm
Word was passed that we were heading into the eye of the storm

We sailed against the wind fighting hard to stay on course
We had never before encountered a storm with such driving force
Waves the size of mountains came crashing across the bow
Dorothy was magnificent, queen of the seas for now

She never moved toward the mainland and had a very short history
She moved northward in the Atlantic and finally died at sea
We returned to Norfolk where our journey had begun
Check the superstructure and assess the damage that was done

Dorothy was a nightmare the way she howled and screamed
Dorothy was more beautiful than anything we dreamed
Sometimes I look out over the ocean thinking way back then
And Dorothy in her Glory, I’d love to see her once again.


Hurricane Dorothy in 1966 was a short lived hurricane
that died out in the North Atlantic never reaching the mainland.
I was at sea in the eye of the storm. Awesome.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 10:10 AM
A well deserved win for you. Congratulations Vince. Love, Carol
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August 5, 2012 at 10:20 AM
Vince, you are quite the brave heart...a wonderful write!! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations Vince xx
Roberts Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 8:44 PM
please go read the contest rules again
Guzzi Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 1:50 PM
fantastic write. Worth reading twice!
Mason Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 4:10 PM
She might be hanging in Kansas ... smile ...
Guzzi Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 5:42 PM
Excellent write! The end rhyme is not even noticble you're so skilled. Light & Love PS How about a blog comment Vin?
Bird Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 8:40 PM
I would think that the dark rolling skies would be very horrifying to see Vince, but, good to know that you lived through it and share a piece of your past with us. Well penned!
Freeman Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 12:31 PM
That must have been an awesome experiance, did you pass directly thru the eye? Moses
Loving Iii Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 12:23 PM
a ride that was'nt that easy to ride in earlier years. lucky you. jhl
Fraser Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 11:00 AM
Awesome poem Vince, i bet she was a picture in her fury like tantrum>>James
Mckenzie Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 10:03 AM
Vince~Very sad stories I love the ocean and its unpredictability I'm sorry Dorothy went down! Well written my friend! Laura :0)
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