Dorian Gray

(Limerick) There was a man called Dorian Gray Who tried hard not to get old and gray So a swap he just did Portrait wrinkles did rid Till his rotten flesh ate it away. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2011 September,10, 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2014 10:51:00 PM

and that is the story of Dorian Grey!!! I love that tale. Nicely represented.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/13/2014 10:01:00 AM

Thank you Andrea! xxxx D.

Constance La France

Date: 9/11/2014 4:49:00 PM

I recall seeing the movie of Dorian Gray and of course, I read the book, you captured poor Mr. Grays problem in a nutshell, wonderful ~~

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/11/2014 8:16:00 PM

Thank you Broken Wings! Glad to know that you think so abut my D.G. Limerick. The best to you my friend! xxxx D.

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/10/2014 1:45:00 PM

Nice Limerick here Dorian!! Suffice it to say that Mr. Dorian Grey did not have a very nice outcome at the end. Enjoyed your work here. Cheers, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/10/2014 4:26:00 PM

Thank you Gary! Nice to know you think so. Best wishes to you! xxxx D.