Doors

Il vaut mieux- as there was nothing.
None knocks at the door, as I don’t knock more
A horse doer, escaping from the stable
I penetrate a place then dropping from the window
Humming – hawing,
Rushing,
Sighing,
-In a far bench
I count the stumbling words, trailing the weakened tongue

Il vaut mieux- as there will be everything.
I come looking for incision to run away
The scattered papers, I let go
Trying another iron or wooden door
I’m crazy about wall’s hole
Joyful,
Sorrowful,
Lustful,
Our relation is like railway lines
We meet underneath the pressure of changing the course.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 23, 2013 at 5:49 PM
Kanour, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Wishing you the best this new coming week. Take care :-) Linda
Med Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 3:58 PM
Thank you Poet dear
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March 4, 2013 at 7:26 PM
I like the words you got up there ;} welcome to poetry soup. I've been on here a little more then 3 yrs ;}
Med Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 5:09 PM
Thank you dear Debbie
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February 25, 2013 at 9:36 AM
Kanour welcome to the soup, this is an excellent piece of work...David
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March 18, 2013 at 5:09 PM
Thank you Sir. David
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October 28, 2012 at 12:33 PM
Nice write Med! I love the illustration of the railway lines - clever.
Med Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 5:21 PM
Thank you Vicky :) for these nice words you comment on my poem... Warm regards, Med
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October 18, 2012 at 5:40 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Kanour. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
Med Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 5:38 PM
I'm so appreciated with you welcoming me, sure we'll share more and more love... Warm regards, Med
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October 18, 2012 at 4:43 AM
Thank you Doreen and Anne, I appreciate your words... Regards, Med
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October 17, 2012 at 12:03 PM
Welcome you to the P-Soup - Kanour, hope you will have a lot of fun to share your poems here with us. - Your poem is very well written, I like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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