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Door Open For Love

love often just stays by the door, hesitates, enters not, no more, I entice him with a warm smile, desire, wish, he stay for a while, love once lost, does not play encore. Written 20/10/2023 2nd placement 8 syllables each line 5 lines aabba rhyme Joseph May sponsored Short poem contest

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Date: 10/23/2023 1:03:00 PM
- So true and lovely written, Krish :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/23/2023 10:43:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise!!:)
Date: 10/23/2023 12:20:00 PM
Very nicely written Krish, Congrats on your win
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/23/2023 10:42:00 PM
Thanks ! and for your contest! Lovely poems generated!
Date: 10/23/2023 11:18:00 AM
Back with big congratulations in your win. Hugs my friend
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/23/2023 12:11:00 PM
Thanks Eve! Congrats to you too for your win!!
Date: 10/21/2023 9:15:00 PM
Very good inspirational write, Krish. Good luck in the contest. Many blessings my friend
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/21/2023 11:30:00 PM
Thanks Eve! Love your kind remarks!
Date: 10/21/2023 8:03:00 AM
Truly, there may not be an encore…don’t shy away. Very well said, Krish!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/21/2023 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Kim! Much appreciate your kind words!
Date: 10/21/2023 1:57:00 AM
A deeply emotive choice for the contest. Good luck.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/21/2023 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Very much Silent One! Pleased you like it.

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